Kiss-Ass
contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Sixty70
Well done! It's impossible to please everybody. Trying anyway just leads to frustration and disappointment. Maybe exhaustion. Good job expressing the message.
Love that initial 'gee'. That sounds like a people pleaser.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Well done! It's impossible to please everybody. Trying anyway just leads to frustration and disappointment. Maybe exhaustion. Good job expressing the message.
Love that initial 'gee'. That sounds like a people pleaser.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the good review.
Comment from humpwhistle
Trying to please everyone can be a noble goal.
Your poem fails to articulate anything ignoble about it.
I don't think you've made your point.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Trying to please everyone can be a noble goal.
Your poem fails to articulate anything ignoble about it.
I don't think you've made your point.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Lee
Comment from Joan E.
What a catchy title and illustration! Thank you for sharing your fun in this 5-7-5 senryu. Good luck with the goal, and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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What a catchy title and illustration! Thank you for sharing your fun in this 5-7-5 senryu. Good luck with the goal, and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, Joan. I had to come up with a good human foible (lol)
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA - an all too familiar a feeling, and it's a horrible one I try to avoid altogether. It's become much easier as I have grown older, but your poem, my dear, brings that squirmy feeling right back - those times you should have said F-bomb off and didn't. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Love,
Dawn (Good luck!!!)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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HAHAHAHA - an all too familiar a feeling, and it's a horrible one I try to avoid altogether. It's become much easier as I have grown older, but your poem, my dear, brings that squirmy feeling right back - those times you should have said F-bomb off and didn't. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Love,
Dawn (Good luck!!!)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, Dawn. Glad you enjoyed. I had to pick a worthy human foible (lol)
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LOL - it's a good one, alright! Sorry, I'm about to log off. My cat isn't feeling well tonight!
Comment from ronnie k
Try and try again satisfaction must but accepted and if there not keep it moving and if you have to, come back and make amens LOL
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Try and try again satisfaction must but accepted and if there not keep it moving and if you have to, come back and make amens LOL
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for the good review. Y.
Comment from c_lucas
Ass kissers need to keep a large stock of mouthwash. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Ass kissers need to keep a large stock of mouthwash. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the great review, Charlie. Y.
