Selections For Book Project
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "The Dominion of Man"possible selections for inclusion in book project
3 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I'm thinking this is not just about the storm over the sea mikey, and you have definitely been there at the helm, sailed the waters successfully, and we the crew have learnt much. Lovely free verse and great presentation.
cheers,
valda
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I'm thinking this is not just about the storm over the sea mikey, and you have definitely been there at the helm, sailed the waters successfully, and we the crew have learnt much. Lovely free verse and great presentation.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your poem and presentation.
-I especially like the very beginning lines.
-The last section is so poignant.
-I think that since you were there
sailing the waters and stood upon the mountain
says that you gave it everything you had,
and maybe did some good because of it.
-Thanks for sharing.
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-I like your poem and presentation.
-I especially like the very beginning lines.
-The last section is so poignant.
-I think that since you were there
sailing the waters and stood upon the mountain
says that you gave it everything you had,
and maybe did some good because of it.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written poem.The well-chosen words flowed and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork was very well-chosen and completed the poem well.
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A well-written poem.The well-chosen words flowed and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork was very well-chosen and completed the poem well.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
