Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Hi,
I enjoyed reading this one, and was waiting for the pouch line...you gave us a real fun piece, this was a quick, enjoyable read...I loved the ending..seems she might have been right...ha ha..

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thank you Victoria for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day my friend...Bill

reply by mrsmajor on 31-Jan-2017

You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure...

Comment from sandragee

Excellent

Congratulations on your win. Well done. I love that Tom's wife does all the talking in this tale. In a few short lines, she gives the reader a sense of who Tom is, who she is, and why their marriage lasted fifty years.
Love the humor.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thank you Sandra for your excellent review, I appreciate your comments. Have a great day my friend...Bill

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

In the first place, congrats on the win! This is very well written and funny and she may have a point. But if your like me and my wife, we're never apart for long. I wish I had a six for you.

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thanks Mike for your excellent review, I appreciate it. And, thanks for the offer of a six. I'm just glad that you enjoyed it. Have a blessed day my friend...Bill

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I love it! How funny, I hope it isn't true, I think I'd ban you from my side! LOL. I can easily see why you won this contest, it did honestly bring a smile to my face. Well done, and congratulations. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you Sandra for your funny review, I appreciate it. You put a smile on my face also. Have a great week my friend. Cheers...Bill

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
congratulations on winning the 100 word story. It is very well written, and has a great sense of humor.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you Mary for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

Congratulations on a well-deserved win. This was a very entertaining story but I would think he was trying to kill her lol. I guess my mind works differently to yours lol. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you for your funny review, I appreciate it very much. Have a great day...Bill

Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

This short story was such fun to read. I enjoyed the light note that it ended on, although I was ready for something more sinister. Not a spare word in the 100! Good luck with the contest! Caroline

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you Caroline for your excellent review, I appreciate it very much. Have as great day...Bill

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahaha, I saw that puch line comin' from a half a mile away, Bill.
Still, it did little to dampen the humor.
Well done, and congrats on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thanks for your excellent review, I appreciate it...Bill

Comment from pit viper

Excellent

A tender and playful piece that illustrates the importance of relationships. Very consice and well-written. Loved it! :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you very much my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day...Bill

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! Sounds like an old joke, but not one I can recall hearing. Congratulations on first place in the contest. Humor almost always wins. :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thank you for your excellent review and your congratulations.