Walk by Geysers fair
5-7-5 contest18 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I believe that anything/anyone falling in would not survive the experience. Your 5-7-5 is well written and interesting. I'm sure many people have wondered about it. Last line is a gem. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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I believe that anything/anyone falling in would not survive the experience. Your 5-7-5 is well written and interesting. I'm sure many people have wondered about it. Last line is a gem. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Thank you so much. Geysers' are such a mystery. 😊
Comment from Sherman541
LOL but isn't that true -a beautiful thing to see from a distance. I think you captured it well - great picture choice - Great Job - Sarah
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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LOL but isn't that true -a beautiful thing to see from a distance. I think you captured it well - great picture choice - Great Job - Sarah
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Sarah :) Carolyn
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your welcome - Sarah
Comment from Thal1959
A most interesting, if not bizarre concept. It starts with a proclamation of the geyser's fairness or beauty. But it ends with a humorous remark. I don't know if this dichotomy of thoughts will fare well in the contest, but good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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A most interesting, if not bizarre concept. It starts with a proclamation of the geyser's fairness or beauty. But it ends with a humorous remark. I don't know if this dichotomy of thoughts will fare well in the contest, but good luck.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much, :) Carolyn
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You're welcome.
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a dangerous place in Yellowstone. It scares me less that quicksand, because at least if you get hurt... the body can be easily found. It can definitely burn more than the tushy. Good visual imagery created. Nice work.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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That's a dangerous place in Yellowstone. It scares me less that quicksand, because at least if you get hurt... the body can be easily found. It can definitely burn more than the tushy. Good visual imagery created. Nice work.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the great review. :) Carolyn
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is a fun 5-7-5 poem for the contest entry. I don't think I would get too close to that upward hot shower myself. But it sure would be fun to see from a safe distance! Great contest entry, Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This is a fun 5-7-5 poem for the contest entry. I don't think I would get too close to that upward hot shower myself. But it sure would be fun to see from a safe distance! Great contest entry, Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you, for this wonderful review. So glad you enjoyed the poem. :) Carolyn
Comment from Trybuck
No geyser for me
Too much heated pressure
with no on off switch
Wouldn't mind seeing one from a distance but definitely no close ups
Good luck in the contest, Buck
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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No geyser for me
Too much heated pressure
with no on off switch
Wouldn't mind seeing one from a distance but definitely no close ups
Good luck in the contest, Buck
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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good poem there, you could have entered as a sequel... Thanks for the delightful
input. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, I would love to travel the world over and see all the amazing sights in the world....this is just beautiful sweet lady...so very nicely written...and I love this picture...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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HI Carolyn, I would love to travel the world over and see all the amazing sights in the world....this is just beautiful sweet lady...so very nicely written...and I love this picture...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you, dear Linda, Geyers are a fabulous creation and such an awesome sight. In Yellowstone they are timed to the minute as to when they will 'spew' again. Love.. :-) Carolyn
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your so welcome Carolyn, smiling back at ya...xxoo Linda
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! It would burn more than your tush I think. This is a well penned contest entry with correct line and syllable count. It is both simple and eloquent in both form and construction. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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LOL! It would burn more than your tush I think. This is a well penned contest entry with correct line and syllable count. It is both simple and eloquent in both form and construction. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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And thank you for such a wonderful review and entertaining comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
I've heard that animal skeletons are sometimes found? Is it that hot? Oh, my...I'd be walking by too. I know some places do have 'hot springs' though that you can dip into. Great 5-7-5, blessings...
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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I've heard that animal skeletons are sometimes found? Is it that hot? Oh, my...I'd be walking by too. I know some places do have 'hot springs' though that you can dip into. Great 5-7-5, blessings...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you for this great review. Geysers are definitely interesting. :) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
New Zealand a place for thermal pools and geysers, they are situated in that "ring of fire" get som terrible earthquakes. Beautifully written Carolyn, having a rest from the intensity of fanstory for a while, just doing very little at the moment. Wise move staying clear of geysers. Blessings to you and Larry. Roy XXOO
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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New Zealand a place for thermal pools and geysers, they are situated in that "ring of fire" get som terrible earthquakes. Beautifully written Carolyn, having a rest from the intensity of fanstory for a while, just doing very little at the moment. Wise move staying clear of geysers. Blessings to you and Larry. Roy XXOO
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Roy. I can understand taking a rest.i had to make that decision to stay away awhile. Take care of yourself. I'm glad you like this simple poem. I am looking to contest for inspiration as m having difficulty getting going. :). I understand the intensity and the burn out that can follow. Much love to you and Elaine as well. :) Carolyn
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Thank you Carolyn, I only just made it through the year, God will let me know, bless you and Larry,
