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Some Cool Tunes and a Nice Buzz

Prose Potlatch Challenge-Animal President

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Comment from frierajac
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Just wondering if the" Quahog" Edward's Cinema, is this a pun on" qua hog"?This is very funny. I was also wondering if you know it is very cynical? The word "cynical"
being derived from the Greek for the sort of philosophers who followed churlishly
after the likes of Socrates and his gang, and meaning DOG in ancient Greek. Cheers!
Blatant decadence!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

Comment from Jumbo J
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Hey Michael(((((((((((... reviews suck as hard as a dog with no teeth... but entertainment such as this has my own leg cocked at forty a degree angle waiting to put out the fire cause by all those Bic lighters... and BTW, joints dropped for free... yes, that could be the answer to world peace... but you know, the greedy will just hijack the drop and sell it back to the States where the real chillout is needed most.

You're a total crack up Michael... loved the laugh in this very witty and funny -creative write.

With our thoughts we create,
a parallel universe.
James.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

Comment from robyn corum
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Michael,

This was a fun take on a serious situation. It's nice to see a little levity here. *smile* I think you got into the spirit of this dog and really embraced the soul of Brian Griffin. I BELIEVED it. I SUPPORTED it. Where do I go to vote?

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I'm sorry I don't know who Brian Griffin is but I did recognise some real life in this very funny read.
He's in hump mode and ready to soil some legs. - like that line I think it applies in politics today. Well done with this one,
cheers.
valda

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

Comment from Sasha
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Thanks for the laugh, I really need one. This is an excellent entry and I just love Brian as President. You guys clearly have a dynamite sense of humor and thanks so much for sharing it with us. We have to laugh at this mess, or we'd be constantly be crying.


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

Comment from LIJ Red
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I loved that "Wonderful World" scene in Good Morning Viet Nam, where they are blowing crap out of everything. And the Tears of a Clown scene in Platoon, puffing cannabis through a gunbarrel. I'm afraid all the weed burned in Nam only helped the guys to follow orders...but you have created a fine entry for the potlatch challenge.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

Comment from Mary Wakeford
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Wolf Blitzer...lol...awesomeness. Can we just make sure the 'chicken in every home' isn't from Chick-fil-a-- please?

A fun take on the potlatch challenge, Michael, with imagery and expressions that fit real life a little too close for comfort...


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

Comment from country ranch writer
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Well the way I see it what else could go wrong with the world. We have already gone to the dogs way before the announcement.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

Comment from Ric Myworld
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I thought already that Donald the Stump was a cartoon character, and Hilary was the wicked witch. So thanks for the clarification, which helps me to understand they are just clowns, not Looney Tune character. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

Comment from Gloria ....
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Hey Mav, what a terrific idea for a prose potlatch. Brian is one of my favourite dogs on account of because the name Brian is an anagram for Brain. Excellent story with lots of great allusion about current issues and it was good to see the Wolf Blitzer in there too.

You turned Hegel on his head and it works. What a blast. I might even write one myself.

Love this!

Ange


 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016