Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Well they do say love takes care of all things.
Nicely done with the rhyming added. Makes it flow very nicely.
This would have been good in a contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

I am too cheap to pay to compete (against far more talented poets) I tried a couple of times. Thanks so much.

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

I am too cheap to pay to compete (against far more talented poets) I tried a couple of times. Thanks so much.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Bucketlist, a brief but concise message in this 1-6-1 poem. You have rhymed it well to relay some wise advice. Nicely done on this enjoyable piece. ~DD

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thank you so much

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of the poem is an intermediary's touting of the option of "mate" to an antagonist found neck-deep in disseminating "hate".

The work highlights polar dichotomies between the two options and the resolve of the "intermediary" to trade "date" as panacea.

Excellent work! Bravo!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks for your wonderful review and stars

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 12-Dec-2016

Remain Blessed!

reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

You too , you have an amazing interpretive brain