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Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "The Sea Reflected in the Sky"possible selections for inclusion in book project
22 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautiful poem, Mikey. I can find no fault with it whatsoever, and much to appreciate and enjoy. I so much enjoy the sounds of the words... (which I seem to mention a lot, but so few poets seem to give it a thought, and it is part of the music of poetry) and I also very much enjoyed the visual impact of your creative phrases... "laughter glittered on the wings of crystal eagles gliding and sliding through clouds at first drifting then soaring like kites on the strings of imagination." Oh my... that is so beautiful! But all of it is beautiful... that just happens to be my most favorite verse. I loved the whole poem, and congratulations for placing second in this tight contest. It was a squeaker. ;p
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This is a beautiful poem, Mikey. I can find no fault with it whatsoever, and much to appreciate and enjoy. I so much enjoy the sounds of the words... (which I seem to mention a lot, but so few poets seem to give it a thought, and it is part of the music of poetry) and I also very much enjoyed the visual impact of your creative phrases... "laughter glittered on the wings of crystal eagles gliding and sliding through clouds at first drifting then soaring like kites on the strings of imagination." Oh my... that is so beautiful! But all of it is beautiful... that just happens to be my most favorite verse. I loved the whole poem, and congratulations for placing second in this tight contest. It was a squeaker. ;p
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from Leineco
I am honestly in awe of the excellence displayed
in this month's ballot - to the point of pain, at having
to choose "a front runner".
Your poem totally swept me away with both its subject
matter and construction...held me completely captive
with its poetic finesse and compelling imagery.
All I can say is - Great write!
. . .and best of wishes in the voting booth!
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I am honestly in awe of the excellence displayed
in this month's ballot - to the point of pain, at having
to choose "a front runner".
Your poem totally swept me away with both its subject
matter and construction...held me completely captive
with its poetic finesse and compelling imagery.
All I can say is - Great write!
. . .and best of wishes in the voting booth!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful and romantic poem.
Lovely imagery and excellent scattered rhyme and internal rhyme.
The theme is magical and a joy to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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A beautiful and romantic poem.
Lovely imagery and excellent scattered rhyme and internal rhyme.
The theme is magical and a joy to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
Comment from BOO ghost
The picture takes my breath away... a poem of romance. the strongest emotion is love. An invisible sense. Love the title! for SOME REASON i BEEN STUCK ON MIRRORS and water, and reflections. Nice! Many masts of mists. I NEVER THOUGHT OF THAT COMBINATION BEFORE. UNIQUE BLEND. Oh, nice eye with the presentation. Love your color choices. The black and blue look fabulous together. Billowed, now that is a sea word, well, it seems like it derives from the sea. Sea dog, I am. subs BLOW THEIR BALLAST tanks. for and fantasies look good together. hot! tsunami quelled On - the -- strings --- of ---imagination. you got my brain on warp drive. guess i can fill in the blanks with words, right? there are hidden words here?
and felled by the peace
in her soul
Now I always like the word tsunami.
SEX, REMOVE THE E AND ADD AN I
BOO!
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The picture takes my breath away... a poem of romance. the strongest emotion is love. An invisible sense. Love the title! for SOME REASON i BEEN STUCK ON MIRRORS and water, and reflections. Nice! Many masts of mists. I NEVER THOUGHT OF THAT COMBINATION BEFORE. UNIQUE BLEND. Oh, nice eye with the presentation. Love your color choices. The black and blue look fabulous together. Billowed, now that is a sea word, well, it seems like it derives from the sea. Sea dog, I am. subs BLOW THEIR BALLAST tanks. for and fantasies look good together. hot! tsunami quelled On - the -- strings --- of ---imagination. you got my brain on warp drive. guess i can fill in the blanks with words, right? there are hidden words here?
and felled by the peace
in her soul
Now I always like the word tsunami.
SEX, REMOVE THE E AND ADD AN I
BOO!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
Comment from Gloria ....
I knew this was going to be a fine poem when I read the title, the sea reflected in the sky. That is reaching the realms of all possibility.
Right away you draw us into the beginnings, birth in the sea and she, the goddess rises on the crest of a wave and everything is alive for sheer joy.
One of your absolute best ever poems, Mav. I like the soaring kites too.
Super job filled with lots of sensual imagery.
Ange
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I knew this was going to be a fine poem when I read the title, the sea reflected in the sky. That is reaching the realms of all possibility.
Right away you draw us into the beginnings, birth in the sea and she, the goddess rises on the crest of a wave and everything is alive for sheer joy.
One of your absolute best ever poems, Mav. I like the soaring kites too.
Super job filled with lots of sensual imagery.
Ange
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from country ranch writer
THINGS HAPPEN FOR A REASON IF IT WAS MEAN =T TO BE IT WAS MEANT TO BE NEVER QUESTION A GOOD THING WHEN IT COMES YOUR WAY JUST THANK YOUR LUCKY STARTS
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THINGS HAPPEN FOR A REASON IF IT WAS MEAN =T TO BE IT WAS MEANT TO BE NEVER QUESTION A GOOD THING WHEN IT COMES YOUR WAY JUST THANK YOUR LUCKY STARTS
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from Susanjohn
Oh you romantic boy you!! Wonderful dreamy poem...my favorite lines being the last one's.... " I did not question".... ahhh.. anyway why question??? Just go with it!! heheh I really like this Mikey!! :-))
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Oh you romantic boy you!! Wonderful dreamy poem...my favorite lines being the last one's.... " I did not question".... ahhh.. anyway why question??? Just go with it!! heheh I really like this Mikey!! :-))
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from nancyjam
This is beautiful, Mikey - very romantic and magical.
Awesome imagery and word choice.
Good use of alliteration and scattered rhyme.
It is wonderful how a poet's imagination can create romance and
love.
Nancy
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This is beautiful, Mikey - very romantic and magical.
Awesome imagery and word choice.
Good use of alliteration and scattered rhyme.
It is wonderful how a poet's imagination can create romance and
love.
Nancy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from closetpoetjester
Oooh a Kings Ransom of fantasies! LOL I like that
This is the reason imaginations are private haha
Loved this wonderful verse basking in the alure of possibilites. Bravo!
Hope you enjoyed the booty!
The Ransom. LOL
Anyway, one of your best. Sixer for you.
Best line, stepped from the bow on the crest of a wave
(poetic gold, my friend)
Cheers P
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Oooh a Kings Ransom of fantasies! LOL I like that
This is the reason imaginations are private haha
Loved this wonderful verse basking in the alure of possibilites. Bravo!
Hope you enjoyed the booty!
The Ransom. LOL
Anyway, one of your best. Sixer for you.
Best line, stepped from the bow on the crest of a wave
(poetic gold, my friend)
Cheers P
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow. If only...delusion? This is incredibly evocative, and the imagery so very beautiful. What a dream! Or daydream, as the case may be... Do you think if I envision winning the lottery tomorrow that I could? (LOL) Picture it and I'll send you a little sumthin, sumthin...(*grin*). Delusion works for me!
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Wow. If only...delusion? This is incredibly evocative, and the imagery so very beautiful. What a dream! Or daydream, as the case may be... Do you think if I envision winning the lottery tomorrow that I could? (LOL) Picture it and I'll send you a little sumthin, sumthin...(*grin*). Delusion works for me!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016