Comment from l.raven

Excellent

true love does conquer evil...feeling love is a wonderful feeling of peace...and yes a dove is a good sigh of love...very well written....

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Thank you for your kind words. Not easy to convey an idea in 1-6-1 format! Glad you got it.

reply by l.raven on 07-Nov-2016

no it isn't...and still have it say something...your so welcome...xxoo Linda

Comment from Lady Mar

Good

The dove is certainly a beautiful bird. Your 1-6-1 poem has good rhyme and it seems abstract because it starts with love and ends with dove. However, I don't gather the concept of the poem and wonder if the rhyme was the key focus. For instance, help me understand why it starts and ends as it does. Nonetheless, I do say that it is a beautiful poem!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Dove is a symbol of peace and is also a symbol of God's spirit in the Bible. Only with God's love and spirit will we see peace in the world.

reply by Lady Mar on 07-Nov-2016

You know what? I feel you

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a clever combination of two concepts, the dove of peace and the peace of the Heavenly Father above, nicely condensed in your short poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Many thanks for your positive feedback!