Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I love the peacefulness of the morning...before everything wakes up...the silence...love your poem...and a beautiful picture...xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016

Thank for the review and your comment.

reply by l.raven on 30-Oct-2016

you are so very welcome...xxoo

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Check your introduction/description line...

I enjoy quiet too when composing a poem, writing a story, and it's hard to find when real life intercedes. And it always does, especially when there's someone around needing something done or just some of our time... Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for the read and comments.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. It is the best time in the earky mornung to get creative and get some work done while there is no one around to disturb your thoughts.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

It is nice to have a quiet space. It helps imagination which can lead to day dreaming which isn't so nice. It's easy to confuse one with the other.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thanks for the read and the stars.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and the imagery is beautiful. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I could/should have written this! Indeed there is much to love about the morning (especially on weekends) when it is quiet and peaceful. Nicely worded in but 17 syllables.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you for the comment and the stars.

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Cute, and I do relate. When my husband is home, I don't get a thing done.

Your words are well chosen for this brief work. Thanks for sharing.

Drew

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016

Thank you for your comment and the stars.