Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Yeah I'm just escaping my muse fog. It's good to know we all struggle with it from time to time and we're not alone. You did a great job and I think we can all relate :)

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2020

Thanks old mate good hearing from you. Sorry the rewards have long gone on this one will look for your stuff soon.

Comment from Megan3333

Excellent

I love the rhyme you do in this poem it's really pretty. Even though it's only four lines you can tell it's a great poem. I also like how the first and third line have a word with an ing at the end it makes it read really nice.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Thanks Megan for your lovely review. It seems getting this oldie out caused things to improve a little.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Missing My Muse, is a bright little piece to jog the old bean for some deeper material. The virus theme is relenting to race riots and news of the Space X rocket launch and landing.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Thanks Bill and I think getting it out stirred some of the cockles as well. Appreciate your coming by.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hi Geoff. To get more inspired to write, I suggest you join any or all of the Clubs in the Social menu. You don't have to do each challenge but it will give you some ideas and new forms to practice.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

I am interested in learning some of these obscure and whacky forms. But I am not just a poet and I wish we had more prose writers in FS. Thanks for coming by.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for reviving this post, since I missed it the first time and I think many of us can relate. I liked your addition of rhyme and am sure your muse will return from vacation soon. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Yeah well I saw it needed some more points to get it over the "All Time Best" fence. Seems posting that again was a good idea I now have a new poem up for you all that has had some lovely reviews. Thanks again. I have another Ramble coming as well.

reply by Joan E. on 31-May-2020

I'll see you again soon! -Joan

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Sankey
Ah, you have a problem with your muse
Do you suppose that your thoughts were caught by your muse for his own use?

Just you tell your sleepng muse, "I know of a better muse then you"

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Hi Gert, a good suggestion or two even! Muse had had his butt kicked new poem been in the workings for a while now up. Thanks for the great review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 31-May-2020

You are welcome Sankey
Gert

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Muse fog! Most amusing! I hope it clears soon revealing the fertile fields of imagination that lie beneath. Good to hear from you again. I hope you and Louise are both keeping well.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Thanks, I got an e-mail from you about your writing elsewhere. Is that in here too? Appreciate you coming by I do have a poem and another Ramble coming soon.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Sometimes, when that "fog" comes and we fight it so hard, it just gets more stubborn, rendering us unable to write, Your poem is well-written and appealing, indicating a recovering muse. :-)

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Yeah Janice I do have a poem and another Ramble to go up just needed that kick in the behind. Thanks very much. Sorry the fanart is gone, perhaps I should put something else on there?

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

Good luck with that. I hope you wake her up because I've been missing you writing. This is cute poem to let us know that you muse is sleeping. You've written a story about your life. Write one about your wife's life. I love true stories. Besides you're a good poet.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Thanks Beth. I do have another Ramble and a poem about our old door stopper to go up I just needed the kick in the behind as I said to the first reviewer this rouind.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Many seem to be struggling with their muse's lately here on FS, so you are in good company. Four years you've had this little gem, and I'm so by glad you shared it today, Geoff. Blessings to you both, and may your muse get motivated.
Sending my best today as always,
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 31-May-2020

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reply by the author on 31-May-2020

Thanks Sally and I see you have something else for me to look at later. I do have another Ramble and a poem to put up so stay tuned.