Act of Endurance
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Comment from Natalie Walker
This is a lovely faith poem. It flows like a spoken word piece. I really like the message of God being greater than us and also being there for us. I didn't notice any errors or typos. Nice work!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This is a lovely faith poem. It flows like a spoken word piece. I really like the message of God being greater than us and also being there for us. I didn't notice any errors or typos. Nice work!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Rarity hoping my other writes follow these stated intents. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Evil trying to oust good, might be possible if God wasn't on our side. Although we think evil has won sometimes, it hasn't really. Well done this is a thought inducing poem. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Evil trying to oust good, might be possible if God wasn't on our side. Although we think evil has won sometimes, it hasn't really. Well done this is a thought inducing poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Glad aspects of this write were found captivating to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from kiwijenny
I have to read this over . When I do I get it.i didn't know what virtue sown by ticks touching inner soul meant until I reread it....ticks I first thought of as Rocky Mountain fever critters...but I think you mean positive check marks.
Thanks for the depth of this and it's goodness
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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I have to read this over . When I do I get it.i didn't know what virtue sown by ticks touching inner soul meant until I reread it....ticks I first thought of as Rocky Mountain fever critters...but I think you mean positive check marks.
Thanks for the depth of this and it's goodness
God bless
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Interesting perspectives you detailed about this write, the latter was my intention, never considering the critter. Great insight. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Cali O
I know poetry only needs to make sense to the writer but this one makes no sense at all to me and did not seem to have rythmn. I understand this is my first review but it just made no sense to me
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
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I know poetry only needs to make sense to the writer but this one makes no sense at all to me and did not seem to have rythmn. I understand this is my first review but it just made no sense to me
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Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
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I share your feelings, finding it difficult to compose a proper statement. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem engages the imagination as all good poetry should do. I feel that God is so powerful that nothing is a challenge or him or her. A good and contemplative write.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
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Your poem engages the imagination as all good poetry should do. I feel that God is so powerful that nothing is a challenge or him or her. A good and contemplative write.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
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I came to FS asking the question what were the tiny sketches I wrote. Were they poems? I still seek that answer. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very intriguing write that certainly highlights the wonderful aspects of a loving God that conquers hate. Have listed a few grammatical catches below - employ or ignore as you like. Thank you for sharing! :) ;)
"shinning lamplight to" -- 'shining lamplight to'
"in God fullness bright" -- 'in God's fullness bright'
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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A very intriguing write that certainly highlights the wonderful aspects of a loving God that conquers hate. Have listed a few grammatical catches below - employ or ignore as you like. Thank you for sharing! :) ;)
"shinning lamplight to" -- 'shining lamplight to'
"in God fullness bright" -- 'in God's fullness bright'
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Got plenty of them, good heads up. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Kdee1
You have a way with words that makes the reader think. You're a amazing writer and have a true gift. I enjoyed your poem and seriously made me want to do better with mine,
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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You have a way with words that makes the reader think. You're a amazing writer and have a true gift. I enjoyed your poem and seriously made me want to do better with mine,
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Work with them constant revisions. Make it right. I still have pits in my works. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching remarks.
Comment from beizanten
Interesting first paragraph. A good second and third paragraph. a pretty good fourth and fifth paragraph. Interesting sixth and seventh paragraph. A good eight and ninth paragraph. It is good but not great
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Interesting first paragraph. A good second and third paragraph. a pretty good fourth and fifth paragraph. Interesting sixth and seventh paragraph. A good eight and ninth paragraph. It is good but not great
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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I will see if I'm able to reach that higher aspect. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from georgelebard
Sorry, I'm not much of a poem person. I thought it was cleaver but it reminded me of Yoda. If your purpose was to inspire the reader to think about creation and the existence of a god, you succeeded.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Sorry, I'm not much of a poem person. I thought it was cleaver but it reminded me of Yoda. If your purpose was to inspire the reader to think about creation and the existence of a god, you succeeded.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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I do have issues with my writes, desiring statements such as your to aid improvement. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Badger_29
Very excellently worded in a fashion that was somewhat archaic or medieval, which matched the theme of the writing well. I love how you refer to God is the original source of light,
And ou how are you apply the crank contrast of the light to the the darkness. A very pleasing rhyme meter and great ending on a great positive note to seeking wisdom.
I felt like scripture was bothering into it I said it reminded me of a water different scriptures find . In ll Chronicles God says he will heal the land and proverbs says. That wisdom is more valuable than silver and gold .
Excellent read, Oh Happy Day, I will go and tell it on the mountain.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Very excellently worded in a fashion that was somewhat archaic or medieval, which matched the theme of the writing well. I love how you refer to God is the original source of light,
And ou how are you apply the crank contrast of the light to the the darkness. A very pleasing rhyme meter and great ending on a great positive note to seeking wisdom.
I felt like scripture was bothering into it I said it reminded me of a water different scriptures find . In ll Chronicles God says he will heal the land and proverbs says. That wisdom is more valuable than silver and gold .
Excellent read, Oh Happy Day, I will go and tell it on the mountain.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Wow! I'm pleased this write fired your inspirations in faith sounding an awakening within you by things stated by your read. Thanking you for your too generous rate and touching remarks.