Steve, this is Lisa
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I had to review this one too! I saw Dean Kuch's review and missed him...
So here ya go with a big chuckle! That poor older gent looks petrified!
Get it? Old? Petrified?
Groan....
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I had to review this one too! I saw Dean Kuch's review and missed him...
So here ya go with a big chuckle! That poor older gent looks petrified!
Get it? Old? Petrified?
Groan....
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I miss Dean, terribly. He was an extraordinary talent and a great friend to many of us. Thank you for this wonderful review.
I have to go to work shortly, but will review some more later tonight.
God bless,
Steve
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Dean was one of a kind.
An incredible talent and a wonderful man!
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Yes, he was.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, humorous. However, I would suggest presenting it in a different way and with a coloured background so it's easier to read. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Nice poem, humorous. However, I would suggest presenting it in a different way and with a coloured background so it's easier to read. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Thank you Oliver for the awesome review. I accidentally put it in prose lol.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Lulube
lol lol chuckle chuckle love the expression on his face, maybe twins? lol
A good warped sense of humor, I love those kind. Have to express the silly humor
once in a while, it really does relieve a lot of tension and stress to laugh at what you come up with by yourself.
good job
lulube
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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lol lol chuckle chuckle love the expression on his face, maybe twins? lol
A good warped sense of humor, I love those kind. Have to express the silly humor
once in a while, it really does relieve a lot of tension and stress to laugh at what you come up with by yourself.
good job
lulube
Comment Written 06-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! I agree Lulube, A good laugh cleanses the soul. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from barkingdog
You have posted this under prose. I don't know if it will put you in the contest. Maybe, if you contact Tom he can straighten it out and enter you.
Your entry is especially funny because of the picture.
It's not a message a man his age is used to hearing.
:)e
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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You have posted this under prose. I don't know if it will put you in the contest. Maybe, if you contact Tom he can straighten it out and enter you.
Your entry is especially funny because of the picture.
It's not a message a man his age is used to hearing.
:)e
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review and advising me the prose mistake. They didn't allow me in the contest I suppose, I noticed it wasn't in there. I will be more careful in the future.
Have a blessed evening.
Steve
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Steve. Excellent 5-7-5. I love the humor in it for sure.
If this is a contest entry, it is not showing up as such at the bottom of the piece. You'd best check with tom and see if you did it correctly. good luck in it anyway. Good job. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Hi, Steve. Excellent 5-7-5. I love the humor in it for sure.
If this is a contest entry, it is not showing up as such at the bottom of the piece. You'd best check with tom and see if you did it correctly. good luck in it anyway. Good job. Bob
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Bob for the awesome review. It didn't make it into the contest as I accidentally added it to Prose lol.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from DR DIP
hahaha thats funny well not for steve the dirty old man haha great photo of Steve.
imagine that news at the end of the line when your in your late seventies
funny lines well done
dip
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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hahaha thats funny well not for steve the dirty old man haha great photo of Steve.
imagine that news at the end of the line when your in your late seventies
funny lines well done
dip
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you DR DIP for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Wow! How did you get my picture? You'll be hearing from my attorney and I guess I'll be hearing from Lisa's. I worked with a man who was in his seventies. He told me that he had gotten a young girl pregnant. He said, "Her mom didn't care, but her grandmother raised hell."
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Wow! How did you get my picture? You'll be hearing from my attorney and I guess I'll be hearing from Lisa's. I worked with a man who was in his seventies. He told me that he had gotten a young girl pregnant. He said, "Her mom didn't care, but her grandmother raised hell."
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Her Grandmother raised hell. Priceless! Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, Not sure this is prose or a story. I see it say humorous 5-7-5 contest at the top. Did you mean for this poem to be in a poetry contest?
As for the poem itself. I don't really get it. I suppose the joke is based on the picture and not that actual poem.
I would suggest contacting Tom. perhaps he can move this to the poetry contest you wanted.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Hmm, Not sure this is prose or a story. I see it say humorous 5-7-5 contest at the top. Did you mean for this poem to be in a poetry contest?
As for the poem itself. I don't really get it. I suppose the joke is based on the picture and not that actual poem.
I would suggest contacting Tom. perhaps he can move this to the poetry contest you wanted.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you for the review my friend. I didn't realize this was entered in as prose. I will certainly be more aware in the future lol. And of course I worked this weekend and am late getting to my reviews.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Douglas Paul
LOL - I love the picture you used for this. Those certainly would be disturbing ringtones. Good to see you writing again, my friend
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL - I love the picture you used for this. Those certainly would be disturbing ringtones. Good to see you writing again, my friend
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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Thank you Douglas for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL! Better be careful there. Looks like Steve is about to poop his pants, or maybe even worse. Thanks for sharing your fun and entertaining poem. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Better be careful there. Looks like Steve is about to poop his pants, or maybe even worse. Thanks for sharing your fun and entertaining poem. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2016
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review Ric.
God bless!
Steve