Gramps and Jadon
From the mind of the four-year-old36 total reviews
Comment from sage17611
LOL, since when does a four year old want silence? Your story is so cute, and it is just like a child of that age to say something surprising. I guess he was really tired of that CD. Your story is well told with a nice flow, meeting the prompts for this writing challenge. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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LOL, since when does a four year old want silence? Your story is so cute, and it is just like a child of that age to say something surprising. I guess he was really tired of that CD. Your story is well told with a nice flow, meeting the prompts for this writing challenge. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the five beautiful stars that you have given us. May God bless you!
Comment from jusylee72
so darling. We always say we are going to write down every thing that comes out of their mouths that are clever. Thank God you actually do that and make the memories last. What a happy, intelligent young man you have in your life.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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so darling. We always say we are going to write down every thing that comes out of their mouths that are clever. Thank God you actually do that and make the memories last. What a happy, intelligent young man you have in your life.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the five beautiful stars that you have given us. May God bless you!
Comment from royowen
I love this gramps/grandson conversation, as a grandfather myself, I've had many a wonderful conversation, with my beloved offspring's offspring, they are the quirkiest and most spontaneous people one can imagine. Well done, beautifully written, a great entry in this I remember writing contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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I love this gramps/grandson conversation, as a grandfather myself, I've had many a wonderful conversation, with my beloved offspring's offspring, they are the quirkiest and most spontaneous people one can imagine. Well done, beautifully written, a great entry in this I remember writing contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the five beautiful stars that you have given us. May God bless you!
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Most welcome, and you too.
Comment from create4christ
TOO FUNNY!! Sometimes kids can be SO funny...even when they say something that, when they get older, would be considered disrespectful...and sometimes worse...because they're so clueless. Your story is precious. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck with your I REMEMBER contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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TOO FUNNY!! Sometimes kids can be SO funny...even when they say something that, when they get older, would be considered disrespectful...and sometimes worse...because they're so clueless. Your story is precious. Thank you for sharing.
Good luck with your I REMEMBER contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the five beautiful stars that you have given us. May God bless you!
Comment from Ginger Banks
A cute story, it's till fun and has the honesty of a child brought forth, it made me laugh too, which can be a little bit rare. Your spacing in the dialog is perfect and understandable. Thank you so much for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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A cute story, it's till fun and has the honesty of a child brought forth, it made me laugh too, which can be a little bit rare. Your spacing in the dialog is perfect and understandable. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the five beautiful stars that you have given us. I did take your kind suggestion and I unbotched the dialogue! LOL May God bless you!
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You're most welcome, it was a treasure anyway. Again, thank you for sharing.
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Thanks again.. And
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Author,
This is a really sweet recount of a cute
story between you and your grandson. I don't know if I
am familiar with the Morrison sisters, but I can't blame
Jadon for desiring silence after 2 hours listening to the
same CD...
I think you did a great job on this short entry.
Well done,
Linda
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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Author,
This is a really sweet recount of a cute
story between you and your grandson. I don't know if I
am familiar with the Morrison sisters, but I can't blame
Jadon for desiring silence after 2 hours listening to the
same CD...
I think you did a great job on this short entry.
Well done,
Linda
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
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When I saw the writing prompt for ?I remember? I was immediately transported back, in my mind, to this somewhat incoherent and yet extremely precious interchange with my grandson. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing with such extreme kindness and the four stars that you have given us. Sweet Linda, just to let you know what you said about this was absolutely true. So I did rework it a bit and I would like to invite you to check it out and see if it now passes muster! LOL May God bless you!
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Author,
"Extreme kindness" Yes, I should have offered to come back to re-review this...which I always would do.
Glad to have helped to improve this.
I have sent a new review and offered your cute story and entry an excellent rating.
Up to muster! Sir!
Linda
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it a lot. As far as the Morrison sisters go, check them out on YouTube. There out of Calhoun, Georgia, but they are good. I wrote a song number 10 on their album homesick. The title of the song I wrote is "get it together".
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Now, Sir...it would have been to your advantage to include that bit of VITAL information in your entry. I surely shall do that.
Linda
