Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks value of immortality as Jesus said if you believe the things I said you will never see death, well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

I hope my blade is still sharp able to make precise cuts. Glad features in this write captured your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.

Comment from kittykct

Good

This is a consideration from the norm. I'm so literal that it's hard for me to understand. I see that it's part of a chapter book. A lot of work on your part. Keep challenging yourself and us. Kitty

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Yeah, at my age as it was before, mere interests to share views. I'm slowly learning the proper mix. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

I am not religious but I am also not anti-religious. Just be and let be. What does this mean? "an innocent man was cell unjustly,
man as". This is illustrative of the difficukty I had in understanding your poem. One thing you did through was to use "to" when it should be "with". What does this mean? "adventuring I not aid nothing". See what I mean? And this? "I said my had prayers unto the hosts? ????

I am not going to mark you down, but others more than likely will. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018

You should have marked it such. I do have problem with my conveyances. It's people comments as your own which strengthen my writes. Thanking you for your honest response and generous rate.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Found your I said,
but who is saying all the things especially when you wrote this line-

I said life has aim, for righteousness: the division of heaven and hell.
I said to you its worth, it not for us to die: us to be the truth of God words.

Gert

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

This work gathered views from other writes. Pleased you found interests.

Comment from Liilia

Exceptional

A most thought provoking poem, covering so many ideas and strata. It takes me to the stratosphere, the ground and everywhere in between, including below the earth. I like the idea of shadow people influencing us - whether alive or dead - which is quite true in my estimation, since a lot of things I live by are things my parents and grandparents said and did and they no longer walk the earth. Thanks for this poem with great scope and for using my painting to illustrate it.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

I hope to do that wonderful picture justice. I thank you, revisions will make a smoother read of this write. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views and charming art.

Comment from Galactia

Good

Hi, this is a great little poem reflecting your belief in God.
The reason i have given a 4 is because i found a little confusing...

First verse. ...
I said there is a voice (it) in thunder
3rd verse...

I got to make money or (nice)?

Last verse...

It's tine for me to be silent, i to say nothingnothing, then i winked.?

Grest job
Regards
Tis

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

Pits are my nightmares, thanks for friends such as you to either kick or point. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging inspiration.

Comment from foxangie123

Good

The first line needs it's as does the it in the last sentence. Then maybe God makes a in the second line. The subject matter is fantastic so if you edit those few at the top which are minor it will be perfect and great reader flow. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Pits my lack revisions, revisions and revisions: I wonder how much I have change. Thanking you for generous rate and shout out.