Loud and Proud
Ya Gotta make a little NOISE sometimes!60 total reviews
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Great , excellent and unique .Emotions are very necessary when writing g or composing a poem, I was able to bond with your poem. Great writing skills and your words were carefully chosen and that helped made this great piece unique in it's own way .
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Great , excellent and unique .Emotions are very necessary when writing g or composing a poem, I was able to bond with your poem. Great writing skills and your words were carefully chosen and that helped made this great piece unique in it's own way .
Comment Written 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
Comment from Kaydoe
A well written descriptive Bio poem and follows the 11,8,8,8,8 syllable count. the
rhyming is nice as well. One does get a feel for your life. Good luck with the
contest.
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A well written descriptive Bio poem and follows the 11,8,8,8,8 syllable count. the
rhyming is nice as well. One does get a feel for your life. Good luck with the
contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
Comment from Glasstruth
Like how this comes full circle with the yelling. It's a poem about growing pains, which in this case I think made a better person. A poem with a definite meaning, and the rhyming is spot on. Well done! Les
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Like how this comes full circle with the yelling. It's a poem about growing pains, which in this case I think made a better person. A poem with a definite meaning, and the rhyming is spot on. Well done! Les
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
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It was truly my pleasure to read this. Poetry is the most beautiful way to express one's inner thoughts. Everyone is really poet, they just don't realize it. It's used in language everyday. :)
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well said my friend.
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from Slythytove2
Like you no one has ever left having not heard me. I always thought hard-of-hearing meant you couldn't hear anything. Now I find out it's the loss of harmonic ranges. I thought all the movie actresses had failed speech lessons and couldn't talk straight any more. My daughter bought me a watch with an alarm. When it would go off I couldn't hear it till she asked if I was going to turn the thing off or not. Good luck with the contest.
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Like you no one has ever left having not heard me. I always thought hard-of-hearing meant you couldn't hear anything. Now I find out it's the loss of harmonic ranges. I thought all the movie actresses had failed speech lessons and couldn't talk straight any more. My daughter bought me a watch with an alarm. When it would go off I couldn't hear it till she asked if I was going to turn the thing off or not. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
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Thank you for your kind and pleasant reply.
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FanStory is a place to encourage and be encouraged by fellow writers.
May God Bless You!
Comment from GeraldS
I like this narrative, and I like the way it unfolds. Life does speed by much too quickly. Then one day you look in the mirror and see an old man staring back at you. After that you struggle to keep your life from becoming irrelevant.
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I like this narrative, and I like the way it unfolds. Life does speed by much too quickly. Then one day you look in the mirror and see an old man staring back at you. After that you struggle to keep your life from becoming irrelevant.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
Comment from c_lucas
The way Man has eternal life is through his off springs. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
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The way Man has eternal life is through his off springs. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very good bio contest entry. Loved the content and the rhythm and rhyme. I was interesting a gave a peek-see into your personal life...I like to know people! Good luck. God bless and hugs, Susanne
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Very good bio contest entry. Loved the content and the rhythm and rhyme. I was interesting a gave a peek-see into your personal life...I like to know people! Good luck. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
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Your welcome and I will be voting
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A little like lemon squeezy...I like that.
I too fell under the yelling idea, but soon realized they could just tune that out too.
Now with grandchildren of my own, I sit back and watch my daughter and her ideas.
Quite an eye opener.
Very nice contest entry. Your syllable count is spot on and ilike the injected words of action whether you meant them to be sarcastic or just funny.
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A little like lemon squeezy...I like that.
I too fell under the yelling idea, but soon realized they could just tune that out too.
Now with grandchildren of my own, I sit back and watch my daughter and her ideas.
Quite an eye opener.
Very nice contest entry. Your syllable count is spot on and ilike the injected words of action whether you meant them to be sarcastic or just funny.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
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I too have no one that supports my writing of any kind. I understand. But it is our passion, so we write. I not only get enriched from what I read, I also learn.
Thanks Again ,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Judy Couch
Grandchildren are fun because you can spoil them and then send them home. It sounds like you have had a full and interesting life.
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Grandchildren are fun because you can spoil them and then send them home. It sounds like you have had a full and interesting life.
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Ah this is a lovely poem. Five great stanzas that read like Limericks. You have managed to tell us a great deal in this bio, without it sounding cramped or rushed. You show a happy picture of you and your children - now you're a Grandpa - that's how time flies. Stay happy and healthy and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Ah this is a lovely poem. Five great stanzas that read like Limericks. You have managed to tell us a great deal in this bio, without it sounding cramped or rushed. You show a happy picture of you and your children - now you're a Grandpa - that's how time flies. Stay happy and healthy and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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I want to express my heartfelt appreciation to you for not only reading ?Loud and Proud?, but also for taking the time to review it. We all know that our time is limited and everyone on FanStory covets our reviews. Most of our fellow FanStoryans are like me, in that they have never been published or paid for writing anything. No one in my family is a big fan of poetry and so I get my correction and adulation from you! The five beautiful stars that you have bestowed upon me enhance the viability of this piece. We need each other and I appreciate you very much. May God bless you! FYI The vote for Bio is today.
