Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Congratulations on your second place finish in this contest! WEll done, beautiful imagery in such a compact poem. Great job in this and again, congrats!
Cat

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Congrats to you too on your success in the contest thanks for reading ZANYA

Comment from Natalie Walker

Excellent

This is a great 5-7-5 poem, and a beautiful way to describe a sunset. It is simple and vivid. It paints a clear picture, which is a difficult task with such few syllables to work with. Great work.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and the encouraging critique Zanya

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Some sunsets do present very unique, and amazing, scenes as this well written poem depicts.

Nature has a way of creating scenic wonders to be shared and treasured.

Should be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and the encouraging critique Zanya

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi zanya, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, brilliant use of alliteration and wonderful description, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and the critique , managed to get inside the winner's enclosure !! Zanya

reply by Eric1 on 30-Mar-2016

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Aznya,

Nice job with your 5/7/5. Great composition with the right amount of syllables, attractive presentation, and good concrete imaging. Good job!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and the critique co-incidentally I am attempting to find out more re the Haiku format and I am advised that you are well informed in the field.Zanya

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 28-Mar-2016

Yes, I like to help do not hesitate to contact me via PM private message anytime and let me know how I can help.

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

I assume the implication is that such colors at sunset are as rare as saffron. I kills me to spend such sums of $ that saffron sellers demand, but great Zeus, on boiled potatoes and on rice it is delicious.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Great review thanks for reading Zanya

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

I truly enjoyed this piece as it is nicely composed as well as pure. Good luck in the 5-7-5 contest. Thanks for sharing this. Take care

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thank you for reading and the critique Zanya

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

You have painted a gorgeous picture with your words. Loved the imagery and the colorful description of the sky. Good rhythm and flow. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Thanks for this accolade Zanya

Comment from Lynn27

Exceptional

Your poem is well crafted. Your words that you chose were lovely and powerful with painted the scene as I read. The photo was great choice too.

Happy Writing,

Lynn

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Spring will leisurely wring itself from Winter's stranglehold. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good Luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

Great opening line to this thanks for reading and the critique Zanya