Home on the Range
Contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
Your poem goes well with the tune to Home on the Range. I especially like the part about the mailman not being able to reach the box. I'm surprised he was able to get down the road.
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Your poem goes well with the tune to Home on the Range. I especially like the part about the mailman not being able to reach the box. I'm surprised he was able to get down the road.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
Comment from winnona
You did a good job of completing this challenge for the contest. Your words flow from one line to te next sending a message of the poem to the reader. Well done and your choice of words made me think of being stuck out in the snow trying to get somewhere. Good luck in the contest.
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You did a good job of completing this challenge for the contest. Your words flow from one line to te next sending a message of the poem to the reader. Well done and your choice of words made me think of being stuck out in the snow trying to get somewhere. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
Comment from l.raven
HI Johngie, I enjoy reading your poem to the tune of home on the range...and I love snow...good or bad... very well written...and I love the rhythm...luff Linda xxoo
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HI Johngie, I enjoy reading your poem to the tune of home on the range...and I love snow...good or bad... very well written...and I love the rhythm...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Mar-2016
Comment from William Ross
I do like this but you didn't finish the song you only went half way with it. i would of liked to see where you could have taken this.
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I do like this but you didn't finish the song you only went half way with it. i would of liked to see where you could have taken this.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2016
Comment from melyuki
Hi Johngie thanks for sharing this grand little verse set to the tune of " home home on the range. " What a grand job you've done creating this cleverly worded verse about the snow. A touch of humor runs through the poem and gives it that little twist which makes it so delightful. I imagine many folk who deal with snow through winter could relate to your words. No snow where I live , but I've heard folks stories who do have to contend with snow and its pitfalls. Best of luck to you in the contest. cheers mel
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Hi Johngie thanks for sharing this grand little verse set to the tune of " home home on the range. " What a grand job you've done creating this cleverly worded verse about the snow. A touch of humor runs through the poem and gives it that little twist which makes it so delightful. I imagine many folk who deal with snow through winter could relate to your words. No snow where I live , but I've heard folks stories who do have to contend with snow and its pitfalls. Best of luck to you in the contest. cheers mel
Comment Written 06-Mar-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
A very satirical re-write about the agony of winter to the old tune of Home on the range. I enjoyed this very much as it helps to bring humor into a good poem.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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A very satirical re-write about the agony of winter to the old tune of Home on the range. I enjoyed this very much as it helps to bring humor into a good poem.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from damommy
Great job! I could sing right along with your poem.
How clever. This poem flows well and rhyming is good.
I enjoyed this very much. 8-)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Great job! I could sing right along with your poem.
How clever. This poem flows well and rhyming is good.
I enjoyed this very much. 8-)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I think you did well with changing things up. You can still see the original within the lines so that is a good thing and your chosen snow day theme is good. Well done, and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Hmm, I think you did well with changing things up. You can still see the original within the lines so that is a good thing and your chosen snow day theme is good. Well done, and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from dmt1967
I like the song and your interpretation of it. This is a song I grew up with and yes, when will Spting get here? Has it deserted us and overslept? Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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I like the song and your interpretation of it. This is a song I grew up with and yes, when will Spting get here? Has it deserted us and overslept? Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you
Comment from prettybluebirds
Exceptional. Glad to see you back, Angie. I was wondering when you were going to write something. I have been checking every day. This is really cute. I like the way you changed the lyrics. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Exceptional. Glad to see you back, Angie. I was wondering when you were going to write something. I have been checking every day. This is really cute. I like the way you changed the lyrics. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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Thank you Aunt Ruth. I try to write every day, it doesn't make its way here until the weekend. I do love reading your work.
