Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I had never heard of "pancake ice wafers," but I could visualize them clearly with your description. I did not realize the Shadorma has Spanish origins, but it is a good choice for your theme. Your photograph reminds me of a Monet painting! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Joan. I wish it was worth as much as a Monet. Thank you Joan.

reply by Joan E. on 21-Dec-2015

Not in dollars, but in the pleasure that it brings... -Joan

Comment from amada

Excellent

"Pancake Ice," what a nice and dreamy concept, I can see it in my mind. You describe this nature's phenomenon in a delightful and entertaining way. Thanks!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Amada.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Tom, I have to admit that I've never heard of the Shadorma or Spanish haiku, but doesn't it work well, A lot more interpretation is allowed in this form my friend.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Eric, it is OK, but I have a hard time not rhyming.

reply by Eric1 on 22-Dec-2015

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Tom,

This is a interesting form of poetry that --again -- I've never seen. Your form follows the syllable count that you shared perfectly and also describes an image that lingers. I think the artwork is beautiful as well. Great job!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Robyn, I appreciate that. Have a Nerry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I have come across this style before but did not know that its name was "shadorma" or anything about it, so thanks for adding to my education on that score. Neither, may I add have I ever seen pancake ice in the flesh before. Amazing photography.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Pantygynt. I've only seen it here on Lake Superior in the U.S. I would guess they'd get it in Norway and Greeland. It needs waves, very cold water, and a rocky shore.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

An interesting poem form and also a very interesting subject. The pancake ice is unique and you took an excellent photo.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Sandra.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is an amazing winter structure. Some of the really very pretty things can bee seen in winter. Ice is probably one of those amazing things. ice can be so very dangerous though. Patricia

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you Patricia. Yes, ice is amazing.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this shadorma poem about the pancake ice. I had never heard of that before. so you taught me a geology lesson as well as making me remember this type of poem.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you sweetwoodjax, double the pleasure. Glad you liked and learned.