Comment from krys123

Excellent

AnnieGale;
-what a sweet testimony of how much love you have for your grandchild as you explicitly tell, through your imagery which is exquisitely expressive and vividly descriptive, of how much love comes from your heart.
- each of your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the reading to flow smoothly.
- the picture and outlay of your writing is very appropriate, relative and complementary to your work.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thank you Alex for your thoughtful words and such a kind review and wonderful rating. My grandson is so precious. Being a grandparent such a pure blessing. Best to you :) AnnieGale

reply by krys123 on 02-Dec-2015

you are so sincerely welcome my dearest friend.
Alex

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

What an enchanting poem. You have a beautiful grandson and it's easy to see how he inspired you to write this. Sliding down colorful rainbows - what a wonderful image. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thank you for the wonderful compliments and review. I appreciate you taking the time to read this piece...Best to you, Annie

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

The pride of a loving and doting grandparent is evident in the tone of your poem. You describe the pleasure of watching the sleeping child and dreaming of the possibilities of wonderful future, and the gratitude for such a blessing. Excellent rhyming couplets.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thank you so much for your wonderful review and thoughtful words :)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Oh my gosh what a sweet, sweet little baby:) Grandkids are so precious and especially at that age. Cute little poem:)

teresa

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015

Thank you Teresa. You are so right, grandkids are a new blessing in our lives. Thank you for the kinds words and wonderful review. Annie

Comment from robyn corum

Good

Your love and pride for this little fellow comes through in every word you've written! *smile*

This is a wonderful poem in the sense of the message, but to be honest - it could be improved by maintaining a consistent meter...? Please forgive my rudeness, but we are all here to help each other.

Thanks for sharing! I have my first grandbaby due in just a few months and your poem made me ache for the day!! Thanks!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015

Thank you for your honest opinion. I will go back and check it out. Congrats on your soon to be arrival. They are so precious and wonderful, a whole new feeling. I'm sure you're already in love :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is my review to a grandparent who mentions a grandson.

Across The Room
When you look across the room,
And see your grandson smile,
Why not stop everything,
Just to play with him a while?
For all too soon the years,
May take him to a distant place,
And many will be the days,
You'll long to see his face.
Don't let those precious years,
Slip by until he's grown,
To take some time to cherish him,
And make your love well known.
For as you strive to love him,
The way God wants you to,
You'll build such precious memories,
That he'll show his love to you.

© Patricia Lawrence

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015

Thank you...I feel everything you wrote, so beautiful...you are a sweet soul Patricia Lawrence

reply by patcelaw on 30-Nov-2015

I always share that poem in various forms with parents and grandparents. I wrote in 1988 I think and wrote it in about 6 minutes tow write.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

First of all I love your intense photo of intense red colors. You described in such emotional details your love with every smooth rhythmic beat. Liberty Justice

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015

Thank you so much for your kind words and review Liberty Justice, Sincerely, Anniegale