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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Of Death"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from mfowler
I believe your format as described is working. It is a succinct form that gives the poetry a punchy feel. Here, you've chosen to condense the message of the Cross and Resurrection into a powerful declaration of faith. It is declared as truth and allows for no deviation. Of course, that would be hard in a triquarian. Great faith poem, well written.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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I believe your format as described is working. It is a succinct form that gives the poetry a punchy feel. Here, you've chosen to condense the message of the Cross and Resurrection into a powerful declaration of faith. It is declared as truth and allows for no deviation. Of course, that would be hard in a triquarian. Great faith poem, well written.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the excellent rating and your insights on both the writing and the topic. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Nosha17
It is true if we accept Jesus Christ into our lives and what He did for us we will be assured of redemption. Excellent rhyming and message. Faye
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It is true if we accept Jesus Christ into our lives and what He did for us we will be assured of redemption. Excellent rhyming and message. Faye
Comment Written 12-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Hi Faye,
Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing. I especially enjoyed your insights on the topic.
Debi
Comment from l.raven
HI Debi, I believe He is here for us at all times...my not always seem like it...but just look twice...and believe...I love your beautiful poem...and your beautiful picture...so nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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HI Debi, I believe He is here for us at all times...my not always seem like it...but just look twice...and believe...I love your beautiful poem...and your beautiful picture...so nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hi Linda,
Thank you for your wonderful insights on the topic. I appreciate your kind words about the writing.
Debi
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you are so welcome Debi...xxoo Linda
Comment from Neonewman
The artwork is stellar! This is one of the most masterfully crafted pieces I have seen in quite some time! What a wonderful way to spread the word of our wonderful savior.
God bless!
Steve
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The artwork is stellar! This is one of the most masterfully crafted pieces I have seen in quite some time! What a wonderful way to spread the word of our wonderful savior.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Hi Steve,
Thank you for the awesome six star rating! You brighten my night! I appreciate the kind comments about the poem. Thank you so much. God bless you as well.
Debi
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Absolutely my pleasure!
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Absolutely my pleasure!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend
Thisis a beautiful writing, sounds a bit inspired. I like it . It seems to tell me a lot. Faith and strength to accept the right way.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hi friend
Thisis a beautiful writing, sounds a bit inspired. I like it . It seems to tell me a lot. Faith and strength to accept the right way.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hi Benny Beeharry,
Thank you for the kind comments about the writing. I love your comment about "Faith and strength to accept the right way."
I appreciate you stopping by. Debi
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful way to present Christ's promise of
Redemption.
You have used this form well.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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A beautiful way to present Christ's promise of
Redemption.
You have used this form well.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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HI Nancy,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the presentation and use of the form. I appreciate you dropping by to read and review.
Debi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Nice Triquatrain with solid rhyme and meter. Attractive presentation. Well chosen words about God and to remember that He sacrifice Himself for us, so we may have eternal life. Good job!
Gypsy
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Hello :)
Nice Triquatrain with solid rhyme and meter. Attractive presentation. Well chosen words about God and to remember that He sacrifice Himself for us, so we may have eternal life. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Hi Gypsy,
I appreciate your kind comments about the poem, and your insights on the theme. Thank you for taking the time to stop by to read and review.
Debi
Comment from ericawrites
This is a really beautiful, faith-filled poem,
flows well, rhymes beautifully,
with a very strong message.
Well done, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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This is a really beautiful, faith-filled poem,
flows well, rhymes beautifully,
with a very strong message.
Well done, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review, Erica. I appreciate your excellent review and stars. Thank you for taking the time to stop by to read and comment.
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie,
This A Triquatrain poem is new to me and I always enjoy how you contribute to the advancement of us poets. I found the write to be very inspiring and concise. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
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Debbie,
This A Triquatrain poem is new to me and I always enjoy how you contribute to the advancement of us poets. I found the write to be very inspiring and concise. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Hi GracieAnn,
What a nice thing to say. I have spent the year trying out new poetry forms and just shared as I went along. I never considered that I was contributing to anyone's advancement. I am so pleased you liked this one. The shiny six stars have me smiling!
Debi
Comment from Writingfundimension
Terrific rhyme and meter highlighted this poem for me. I love this:
'I conquered doom. The empty tomb...
a gift to you from me...'
I so enjoy your spiritual poems, Debi. You do them so well!
:) Bev
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Terrific rhyme and meter highlighted this poem for me. I love this:
'I conquered doom. The empty tomb...
a gift to you from me...'
I so enjoy your spiritual poems, Debi. You do them so well!
:) Bev
Comment Written 10-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Hi Bev,
Thank you for your encouraging words. I am so pleased you liked this. I meant for it to be longer, but it just seemed to say all that it wanted to say.
Debi
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You're very welcome, Debi. :) Bev