If you are with me...
A Song Lyric'21 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Ine Very well done from start to finish. I especially liked these lines:
"Oh life is so beautiful, you have to share it
Cause it is already so short, enjoy it now"
Suggestion: "If you are with me, his can last o very long (Is this supposed to be last SO very long?)
Blessings, Bob
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hi, Ine Very well done from start to finish. I especially liked these lines:
"Oh life is so beautiful, you have to share it
Cause it is already so short, enjoy it now"
Suggestion: "If you are with me, his can last o very long (Is this supposed to be last SO very long?)
Blessings, Bob
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.
