Comment from JTStone

Exceptional

Now that was sheer genius.
I want to see anyone just try to argue with that...
obviously inspired by a touch of righteous angry humor. I can feel you. And seriously I think you just taught me a lesson, the reason people are on here is mostly to laugh (At ourselves) and socialize...thank you
JT

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-This is hilarious.
-I love the approach you took for the contest.
-I really like the section on "ianambic pentalameter=====" and your "example" for it plus the explanation with da Dum!
-Another good section: ". Shankspeer did it. But I guess I'm not as good as him. Yeah, sure. Ha!"
-If you were allowed to use more words, you could have covered syllables and rules, as in haiku, sonnets, etc.
-In fact, I can see this piece being expanded on some of those topics.
-I can't imagine how long this took you to do and I look forward to nowing who you are, mistery purson. (Couldn't resist that!)



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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering, 'M'.

Lots of fun intentional miss-spellings, including the clever title, though I'm not sure if you mean the 1st one - 'ONG' - maybe you DO, to set the tone.

This is what I was hoping for in the contest - downright bad-sportsmanship, disgust and venom on how you could possibly not win against your 2nd rate crap opponents and their 'jellosy'. :-)

Excellent.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray.



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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015