Reflections Of Color
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Comment from Nosha17
Guess, in relationships the other man loses out and has to bemoan his situation. Excellent lyrics about romance and with some rhyme. Faye
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Guess, in relationships the other man loses out and has to bemoan his situation. Excellent lyrics about romance and with some rhyme. Faye
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great song of love triangle you are hooked as the other man. It seems you are going to win the Lady but will she stay faithful to you? Will she not going to find another man when she got you?
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A great song of love triangle you are hooked as the other man. It seems you are going to win the Lady but will she stay faithful to you? Will she not going to find another man when she got you?
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An emotive and forthright approach to the act of unfaithfulness.
The poem states a clear, and concise emotive viewpoint , expands
the subject with logic and the words flow with clarity from verse to verse.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2015
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An emotive and forthright approach to the act of unfaithfulness.
The poem states a clear, and concise emotive viewpoint , expands
the subject with logic and the words flow with clarity from verse to verse.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
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Comment from schatzling
I read your story poem lyrics, if you will.
I did enjoy reading it even though it seemed like it was too long....for some reason or another...it is as if one of those paragraphs could either be combined or just withdrawn in its entirety.
The Other Man....is that what you once were but now you are what you saved her from. If so, please don't ever become what she left him for and someone else becomes what you once were....The Other Man.
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I read your story poem lyrics, if you will.
I did enjoy reading it even though it seemed like it was too long....for some reason or another...it is as if one of those paragraphs could either be combined or just withdrawn in its entirety.
The Other Man....is that what you once were but now you are what you saved her from. If so, please don't ever become what she left him for and someone else becomes what you once were....The Other Man.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
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No, I can honestly say I have never been the other man.
And that includes two marriages, the first one lasted 20 years, and the second one is now into its 15th year and much better than the first ever dreamed of being.
I was the man of the last stanza. The one it happened to.
Curious, which verse do you think should be eliminated?
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nicely done.
A story in a song and I love the repeat as it shows dramatically that a marriage is never secure just because one wears a ring.
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Nicely done.
A story in a song and I love the repeat as it shows dramatically that a marriage is never secure just because one wears a ring.
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Comment from Tessa Kay
It is sad that so many people get married and have no idea how to make a marriage work. With divorces being so easy, people get married with no sense of commitment or loyalty. I'm sure, the woman my dad left my mom for, would agree with this poem...
Well written with an interesting perspective. :)
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It is sad that so many people get married and have no idea how to make a marriage work. With divorces being so easy, people get married with no sense of commitment or loyalty. I'm sure, the woman my dad left my mom for, would agree with this poem...
Well written with an interesting perspective. :)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
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Yeah, sorry. It touched a nerve, as you can tell. Unfortunately it is reality, and you've described it very well. :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ This is good take on 'the other man.'
_ Seems like it is usually the 'the other woman.'
_ This was a catchy tune. One that can set you to humming along.
_ Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
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Hi, Brett
_ This is good take on 'the other man.'
_ Seems like it is usually the 'the other woman.'
_ This was a catchy tune. One that can set you to humming along.
_ Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*>*)
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
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