Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 304 "His Word Quickly Spread"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great villenelle and would have been a great entry. I love poems of faith such as this that have such great messages.
teresa
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This is a great villenelle and would have been a great entry. I love poems of faith such as this that have such great messages.
teresa
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you Teresa, me too.
Comment from Ben Colder
The Word in poetry or any other way is always pure. Acceptable to those who have ears to hear the spirit. Well done, poet. Shame the work never reached the contest. Best to you.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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The Word in poetry or any other way is always pure. Acceptable to those who have ears to hear the spirit. Well done, poet. Shame the work never reached the contest. Best to you.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ben.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Its a shame this wasn't in the contest, Tom, I read a few of them and yours is excellent. I don't know why you couldn't find it. It's a lovely style and your theme, Jesus is really beautiful. No one can go wrong with Him. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Its a shame this wasn't in the contest, Tom, I read a few of them and yours is excellent. I don't know why you couldn't find it. It's a lovely style and your theme, Jesus is really beautiful. No one can go wrong with Him. :) Sandra
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Joan E.
I am sorry the contest alluded you, but I'm glad you shared this spiritual poem with us and continued the theme of the "Burning Bush". I admired your rhymes and repeats, especially those of the quoted line. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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I am sorry the contest alluded you, but I'm glad you shared this spiritual poem with us and continued the theme of the "Burning Bush". I admired your rhymes and repeats, especially those of the quoted line. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much Joan.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's a shame you missed the contest Tom. It is a lot of work to write one of these. I love the message you impart.
"Go forth and teach ye all nations", he said.
"Go forth, go preach them the Gospel's good news".
Apostles went, and His words quickly spread.
That was the way they communicated in those days.
Well done Tom. Nancy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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It's a shame you missed the contest Tom. It is a lot of work to write one of these. I love the message you impart.
"Go forth and teach ye all nations", he said.
"Go forth, go preach them the Gospel's good news".
Apostles went, and His words quickly spread.
That was the way they communicated in those days.
Well done Tom. Nancy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Nancy
Comment from rod007
Another great poem that rhymes and flows well. The repetition of the line creates impact:
"Go forth and teach ye all nations", he said.
It shows His perseverance and tenacity teaching mankind to walk the right path. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Another great poem that rhymes and flows well. The repetition of the line creates impact:
"Go forth and teach ye all nations", he said.
It shows His perseverance and tenacity teaching mankind to walk the right path. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Rod.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"if" in notes should be "of". Well written depicting of this event that once again proves "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary" is what life is all about.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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"if" in notes should be "of". Well written depicting of this event that once again proves "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary" is what life is all about.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Brett.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful message straight from His Word. In this world today where Satan rules the spreading of His word is needed more than ever before. There is very little people who are willing to spread the Word.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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A beautiful message straight from His Word. In this world today where Satan rules the spreading of His word is needed more than ever before. There is very little people who are willing to spread the Word.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you very much Sandra. Sadly, you are right. I appreciate the review and the stars.
Comment from Pantygynt
Another sound use for a villanelle is if you wish to preach or have a message to get across, whether it is biblical or that most famous of all villeanelles "rage, rage against the dying of the light.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Another sound use for a villanelle is if you wish to preach or have a message to get across, whether it is biblical or that most famous of all villeanelles "rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. So true.. I always loved that one.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. You wrote a faultless Villanelle with strong repeating lines. The content is religious. Nice read for a Sunday.
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. You wrote a faultless Villanelle with strong repeating lines. The content is religious. Nice read for a Sunday.
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ine. Hope you have a wonderful Sunday, too.
