Little Poems
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Dogs are great and one inspired this great sonnet. Well done my friend. I have three dogs and they are great. They don't let you get lazy, uh,uh, not them. Haha. Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
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Dogs are great and one inspired this great sonnet. Well done my friend. I have three dogs and they are great. They don't let you get lazy, uh,uh, not them. Haha. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
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Thank you Nancy. They are great.
Comment from ravenblack
Well...my dog is the exception to the rule. After she goes, I literally have to drag her to continue the walk. And running- I tried. And she nips at my heels. Still, I would not trade her companionship for anything.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Well...my dog is the exception to the rule. After she goes, I literally have to drag her to continue the walk. And running- I tried. And she nips at my heels. Still, I would not trade her companionship for anything.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Thank you. Every dog has its own oersonality, but they all have their good points that gain our affection.
Comment from rod007
Dogs are wonderful companions and are wonderful to walk or job with. One thing I found irritating when I had a dog was not just the dog poo but how on walks he'd suddenly poke his head in weeds to feed this interlude of philosophical musings. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Dogs are wonderful companions and are wonderful to walk or job with. One thing I found irritating when I had a dog was not just the dog poo but how on walks he'd suddenly poke his head in weeds to feed this interlude of philosophical musings. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thank you rod, good thought.
Comment from flamingstar
Great little sonnet! I have four dogs so I can relate to its theme easily. We walk every morning and they motivate me to get up and get going...
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Great little sonnet! I have four dogs so I can relate to its theme easily. We walk every morning and they motivate me to get up and get going...
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thank you flamingstar , yup that is just one small of many blessings.
Comment from I am Cat
This is the second of the Pushkin Sonnets I've read, and of course, you know who wrote the other one. ;)
I've enjoyed this one.. (and the other) and i love dogs... I especially love that both my dogs love to do what i love to do... sit. stay. good dogs. ;)
Well done Tom.
Cat
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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This is the second of the Pushkin Sonnets I've read, and of course, you know who wrote the other one. ;)
I've enjoyed this one.. (and the other) and i love dogs... I especially love that both my dogs love to do what i love to do... sit. stay. good dogs. ;)
Well done Tom.
Cat
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you Cat. Yup, i reviewed the other one too. Dogs rule.
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Yes, they do...
and you can take that from...
The Cat ;)
Comment from robina1978
Your photo is really excellent, and complements your Sonnet perfectly. How many sonnet forms do you know. They seem to be never ending. This Pushkin one about a jogger and a doggy is really nice. I am sorry you lost your own one.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Your photo is really excellent, and complements your Sonnet perfectly. How many sonnet forms do you know. They seem to be never ending. This Pushkin one about a jogger and a doggy is really nice. I am sorry you lost your own one.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ine, it was a sad day. I often think of her.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very clever take on the Pushkin sonnet. I love your feminine rhymes and the EffE sequence here. Actually this form seems to lend itself to a narrative style rather than the description of an emotion. Perhaps that is why he felt he could write a whole novel using it. Mine is out there too but only for one more day as I only backed it with a pot of gold.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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This is a very clever take on the Pushkin sonnet. I love your feminine rhymes and the EffE sequence here. Actually this form seems to lend itself to a narrative style rather than the description of an emotion. Perhaps that is why he felt he could write a whole novel using it. Mine is out there too but only for one more day as I only backed it with a pot of gold.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I appreciate the input and the high rating. I get yours here today.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Best Buddy
by Treischel
~If I ever write a sonnet, I know who to call.... LOL you write beautiful sonnets and a lot of them.
The sonnet is about the relationship you have with your dog, so many positive things about it. I love the ending :) cold and wet nose. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Best Buddy
by Treischel
~If I ever write a sonnet, I know who to call.... LOL you write beautiful sonnets and a lot of them.
The sonnet is about the relationship you have with your dog, so many positive things about it. I love the ending :) cold and wet nose. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thyank you Gypsy Blue Rose. I'd be glad to assist, anytime.
Comment from artemis53
Loved it. Great subject since I'm seeing more of this and the dogs are having a wonderful time. Come Christmas everyone will be in good shape ;)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Loved it. Great subject since I'm seeing more of this and the dogs are having a wonderful time. Come Christmas everyone will be in good shape ;)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thank you Artemis. Lets hope so, by Christmas.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I wish my allergies could allow me to have a dog - I do love them but..
Great poem and tribute to all those canine companions.
Teresa
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I wish my allergies could allow me to have a dog - I do love them but..
Great poem and tribute to all those canine companions.
Teresa
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thank you Teresa.
