Dreaming about summer.
A song lyric.20 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
UI love the picture. I love the poem. It would make a good song. Let the sunshine for ever, but I know it is not meant to be. It is August, and the children are going back to school. Soon the cold winds of winter will be here. Great work.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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UI love the picture. I love the poem. It would make a good song. Let the sunshine for ever, but I know it is not meant to be. It is August, and the children are going back to school. Soon the cold winds of winter will be here. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. Thanks for the lovely six, Nellie.
Comment from Treischel
A delightful lyrical poem with a definite song that is joyous and full of a peppy rhythmn. It celebrates life and summer. A happy pace with nice imagery. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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A delightful lyrical poem with a definite song that is joyous and full of a peppy rhythmn. It celebrates life and summer. A happy pace with nice imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine. That is superb work mate and sadly I don't have a six left. It is such a dreamy and peaceful piece and full of beautiful imagery. You poetry in the last few months has reached another dimension and I'm loving it. Well done my friend. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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G'day Ine. That is superb work mate and sadly I don't have a six left. It is such a dreamy and peaceful piece and full of beautiful imagery. You poetry in the last few months has reached another dimension and I'm loving it. Well done my friend. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Good morning to you too.
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, it's hard to believe it is almost over...and school is almost back in again...it flew by...I love your poem sweet girl...and the picture beautiful...I love the colors...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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HI Ine, it's hard to believe it is almost over...and school is almost back in again...it flew by...I love your poem sweet girl...and the picture beautiful...I love the colors...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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you are so welcome Ine...you have a wonderful day ...Luff xxoo love ya
Comment from misscookie
I'm sorry it took me so long to reply been busy doing this and that. I love the words to your poem.
It truly made me smile. Yes summer is almost over it seems to take so long to come than goes away to fast.
Cookie
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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I'm sorry it took me so long to reply been busy doing this and that. I love the words to your poem.
It truly made me smile. Yes summer is almost over it seems to take so long to come than goes away to fast.
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You're very welcome. Have a blessed day.
Cookie
Comment from Curly Girly
I wish ....... I dream ...... of summer! We have just had a weekend of heavy snow and it still has not melted. I would love to have a hot, beach day right now!
Nicole
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I wish ....... I dream ...... of summer! We have just had a weekend of heavy snow and it still has not melted. I would love to have a hot, beach day right now!
Nicole
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. I can imagine that you'd like a beach day, Nicole.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dreaming about summer.
by robina1978
Summer brought beauty and delight. Day dreaming of a land with no rain, only sun, and a thousand women. The joy of no responsabilities just lying in the sand with a cold bear in hand. LOL Nice dream! Good job!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Dreaming about summer.
by robina1978
Summer brought beauty and delight. Day dreaming of a land with no rain, only sun, and a thousand women. The joy of no responsabilities just lying in the sand with a cold bear in hand. LOL Nice dream! Good job!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from judiverse
Summer ends all too quickly. Where I live, the kids are going to be headed back to school in a couple of weeks. It would be nice to have summer all year 'round, as you describe. Having the perfect weather really makes the summer days ideal. Nice picture of lying on the beach with an ice cold beer in hand. I'm not a beer drink, but would settle for a Coke! judi
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Summer ends all too quickly. Where I live, the kids are going to be headed back to school in a couple of weeks. It would be nice to have summer all year 'round, as you describe. Having the perfect weather really makes the summer days ideal. Nice picture of lying on the beach with an ice cold beer in hand. I'm not a beer drink, but would settle for a Coke! judi
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. I don't drink beer either.
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You're very welcome. Beer fit your poem, though. judi
Comment from cercie
I would have liked to hear this in music
I tried to do that in my head but I think my head is full today lol
Thank you for sharing I look forward to reading many more
cercie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I would have liked to hear this in music
I tried to do that in my head but I think my head is full today lol
Thank you for sharing I look forward to reading many more
cercie
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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Now that I have written the final chapter in my book I have to think on what to do next .
hugs
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I guess all of my summer plans were this week and next week so it seems to me that it just started but that's because I've been waiting all summer for these things. You're probably right and summer will be over soon. I was told we'll lose like seventy-seven minutes this month alone. I get seasonal depression, guess I'll have to make sure I have my sunshine pill around in the next couple months so I'm prepared but I'm never prepared.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I guess all of my summer plans were this week and next week so it seems to me that it just started but that's because I've been waiting all summer for these things. You're probably right and summer will be over soon. I was told we'll lose like seventy-seven minutes this month alone. I get seasonal depression, guess I'll have to make sure I have my sunshine pill around in the next couple months so I'm prepared but I'm never prepared.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
