Little Poems
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Comment from rod007
A very intellectually invigorating poem. I'm glad you repeated it with the rhymes bolded as I would have missed them. All in all, a good read and bit like the hidden dangers that lurks in those caves. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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A very intellectually invigorating poem. I'm glad you repeated it with the rhymes bolded as I would have missed them. All in all, a good read and bit like the hidden dangers that lurks in those caves. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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Thank you rod. Hmm, hadn't thought of that aspect. Great thought.
Comment from Joan E.
Well, I am enamored with your intriguing photograph and impressed that you met the challenge of the rhyme hidden in the middle, which could not have been easy. Thanks for teaching us about yet another sonnet form. Cheers- Joan, en route to Iceland
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Well, I am enamored with your intriguing photograph and impressed that you met the challenge of the rhyme hidden in the middle, which could not have been easy. Thanks for teaching us about yet another sonnet form. Cheers- Joan, en route to Iceland
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you Joan. I hear from you in Iceland then.
Comment from robina1978
Your nice photo complements your poem perfectly. And the story in it about sand caves being dangerous, is true. Thanks for showing the rhyme and teaching us yet an other form of Sonnet.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Your nice photo complements your poem perfectly. And the story in it about sand caves being dangerous, is true. Thanks for showing the rhyme and teaching us yet an other form of Sonnet.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ine. Definitely can be dangerous.
Comment from Pantygynt
I think you hit the nail on the head there. I might be fun to try and it but it doesn't do much for me either. I think this is an example of form for form's sake. How about writng one where the fifrst word rhymes? The fife star is for your efforts with the form, which you have achieved very well but to what purpose.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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I think you hit the nail on the head there. I might be fun to try and it but it doesn't do much for me either. I think this is an example of form for form's sake. How about writng one where the fifrst word rhymes? The fife star is for your efforts with the form, which you have achieved very well but to what purpose.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I totally agree.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Another unteresting sonnet form. It will be a challenge to master for me. We also have sandstone mountains in our area, but i only admires it from the lower ground.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Another unteresting sonnet form. It will be a challenge to master for me. We also have sandstone mountains in our area, but i only admires it from the lower ground.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thank you Sandra. There are probably caves there too.
