Little Poems
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Comment from rod007
The picture and rhyming were perfect. The words that started the poem captured the scene so well," ..dim soggy sight one rainy night" Brilliant.
Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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The picture and rhyming were perfect. The words that started the poem captured the scene so well," ..dim soggy sight one rainy night" Brilliant.
Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thanks again rod.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Storm Shot" is an excellent example of the poets craft and a beautiful, word picture of a somewhat eerie stormy scene. The rhyme and rhyme scheme are excellent. The red and black color scheme are well chosen.
With great regards,
Preston
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Hi, Treischel,
"Storm Shot" is an excellent example of the poets craft and a beautiful, word picture of a somewhat eerie stormy scene. The rhyme and rhyme scheme are excellent. The red and black color scheme are well chosen.
With great regards,
Preston
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks once again Oreston. A wonderful analysis.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The photo is outstanding, Tom. I know you can't see the rain, but the photo is still really lovely. I loved your poem, LOL, yes, you did try! :) Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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The photo is outstanding, Tom. I know you can't see the rain, but the photo is still really lovely. I loved your poem, LOL, yes, you did try! :) Sandra
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I did, didn't I.
Comment from I am Cat
I really like this photo... i have some like this, Tom... ones that you just go... well, that didn't turn out like I thought it might... but you know... I like it!
lol
It sort of looks like a giant question mark with a large torch in the middle...
very cool..
oh, and the poem is good too. ;)
that's what happens when you get two photographers/poets in one place. LOL
Well done.
Cat
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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I really like this photo... i have some like this, Tom... ones that you just go... well, that didn't turn out like I thought it might... but you know... I like it!
lol
It sort of looks like a giant question mark with a large torch in the middle...
very cool..
oh, and the poem is good too. ;)
that's what happens when you get two photographers/poets in one place. LOL
Well done.
Cat
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you Cat. Yup, you know exactly how it goes.
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Indeed I do... I've got a few I'll have to use and you can see... it's like... well, that's that's bad... I"ve no idea what it is... but it's pretty cool. lol
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Great, ill love it!
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Great, ill love it!
Comment from Pantygynt
Now I see why you became a poet. If the photo works you can write about it (A golden eye) and if the photo doesn't work you can still write about it (this one). You're on the pig's back, Tom. You can't lose!
Which came first the photography or the poetry?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Now I see why you became a poet. If the photo works you can write about it (A golden eye) and if the photo doesn't work you can still write about it (this one). You're on the pig's back, Tom. You can't lose!
Which came first the photography or the poetry?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. The poetry came first, in general. In this case, the picture came first.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a very creative poem. I love how you tell us a story. The ending - at least I tried - was wonderful. The word choices were excellent. The poem enjoyable - terrific read.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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This is a very creative poem. I love how you tell us a story. The ending - at least I tried - was wonderful. The word choices were excellent. The poem enjoyable - terrific read.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Michael.
Comment from st francis
Wow! A stunning photograph that portrays perfectly the poem you have built around your personal experience and what you have captured in the moment. Perfect syllable count for the Minute. Nice rhyming and a complete package. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Wow! A stunning photograph that portrays perfectly the poem you have built around your personal experience and what you have captured in the moment. Perfect syllable count for the Minute. Nice rhyming and a complete package. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you St Francis.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Another beautiful poem. I love the rhythm it has. The words flow well, and it sets the mood for a wet and soggy picture, the glow from the street lamp helps also to set the mood. It is still a beautiful capture although it was not what you had in mind, and at the end of the day you used it well with this minute poem. Great work again.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Another beautiful poem. I love the rhythm it has. The words flow well, and it sets the mood for a wet and soggy picture, the glow from the street lamp helps also to set the mood. It is still a beautiful capture although it was not what you had in mind, and at the end of the day you used it well with this minute poem. Great work again.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you once again Sandra. I appreciate your support..
