David versus Goliath
how is it possible ?4 total reviews
Comment from Gracie619
Very good job with this. I like the message being conveyed as this is a favorite Bible story of mine. Your flow is very refreshing and enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
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Very good job with this. I like the message being conveyed as this is a favorite Bible story of mine. Your flow is very refreshing and enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
Comment from TPAC
I feel the writer thoughts with their doubts about the event, I believe the giant reaching for the lad placed him in compromise, lad striking him then Good thought and touching concepts
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I feel the writer thoughts with their doubts about the event, I believe the giant reaching for the lad placed him in compromise, lad striking him then Good thought and touching concepts
Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job with this. I think you may have had too much story to tell in few words but the fact that it is a well known story - told with your own little interpretation - made it work. Well done.
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I thought you did a great job with this. I think you may have had too much story to tell in few words but the fact that it is a well known story - told with your own little interpretation - made it work. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
Comment from TAB_that's me
Nice story told in your 60 or under words. I've always loved this Bible verse. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
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Nice story told in your 60 or under words. I've always loved this Bible verse. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015