Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 239 "The Iris"Small and Specialty Poems
5 total reviews
Comment from rod007
They are certainly beautiful flowers-an iris a day puts a smile on one's face. A view of an iris with dandelion wine is indeed a delicious pleasure. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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They are certainly beautiful flowers-an iris a day puts a smile on one's face. A view of an iris with dandelion wine is indeed a delicious pleasure. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you rod. Cheers!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A lovely poetry subject and image choice.
Flowers are certainly part of God's amazing tapestry.
The format is quite effective in the shape it forms and I liked your chosen rhyme scheme also.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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A lovely poetry subject and image choice.
Flowers are certainly part of God's amazing tapestry.
The format is quite effective in the shape it forms and I liked your chosen rhyme scheme also.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, Shirley. I enjoy experimenting and am glad you liked this one. I am most pleased.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Beautiful Irises, I had the solid purple variety and they smelled wonderful.
I like the saucer way of writing I must try some day.
Thank You for sharing your beautiful artistry not only photography but writing as well.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Beautiful Irises, I had the solid purple variety and they smelled wonderful.
I like the saucer way of writing I must try some day.
Thank You for sharing your beautiful artistry not only photography but writing as well.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie. A wonderful review and compliment.
Comment from patcelaw
I just created this format as a contest, check it out and write another for the contest. It is a blind contest with a $2.00 entry fee. Patricia
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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I just created this format as a contest, check it out and write another for the contest. It is a blind contest with a $2.00 entry fee. Patricia
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank Patricia. Great, there will be flying saucer sittings all over the place. Yikes!
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With all the flying saucers, Roswell, NM will have nothing on fanstory.
Comment from Pantygynt
i like these better than the outer space ones. The rhymes are more fun. Mind you your vase rhymes ith face or at least as assonance there our vase rhyme with arse except that you say ass. Potato tomato let's call the whole thing off!
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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i like these better than the outer space ones. The rhymes are more fun. Mind you your vase rhymes ith face or at least as assonance there our vase rhyme with arse except that you say ass. Potato tomato let's call the whole thing off!
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Hah, i thought you might have a comment. Foresight? Or premonition?
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Premonition
