Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 241 "This Tree"Small and Specialty Poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I bet he's ruing taking that bet.
It's strange how we often misjudge height until it's too late.
A fine Rictameter poem and perfectly crafted.
The instructions are concise and thorough.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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I bet he's ruing taking that bet.
It's strange how we often misjudge height until it's too late.
A fine Rictameter poem and perfectly crafted.
The instructions are concise and thorough.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thank you Shirley. Kids tend to be fearless.
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad to hear the bet was fictional, but your photograph proves he climbed the tree! I enjoyed your adding rhymes to the Rictameter form--no easy feat either. Cheers- Joan, from the land of Don Quixote's lies
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I am glad to hear the bet was fictional, but your photograph proves he climbed the tree! I enjoyed your adding rhymes to the Rictameter form--no easy feat either. Cheers- Joan, from the land of Don Quixote's lies
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Joan. The climb is true.
Comment from rod007
This is a well written poem in this unique poetic form in this pyramidal-reversed form. But I do hope you keep off the trees less you fall, Tom.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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This is a well written poem in this unique poetic form in this pyramidal-reversed form. But I do hope you keep off the trees less you fall, Tom.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you rod. That was my grandson. My tree climbing days are basically over. Lol.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written rictmeter. Aren't they a fun format to do? May your weekend be blessed and might you stay out of trees. Patricia
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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This is a beautifully written rictmeter. Aren't they a fun format to do? May your weekend be blessed and might you stay out of trees. Patricia
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I will try.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great job!! I've never written a rectameter poem, it sounds hard but you did a great job.
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held my interest all the way to the end
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Great job!! I've never written a rectameter poem, it sounds hard but you did a great job.
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held my interest all the way to the end
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose, you almost disorder a Rictameter review, very nice!
Comment from Pantygynt
I remember reviewing one of these from you some time ago and complaining thathe cross (I think it was) didn't quite work, but my word this little diamond is really tight. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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I remember reviewing one of these from you some time ago and complaining thathe cross (I think it was) didn't quite work, but my word this little diamond is really tight. Well done.
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Yeah i had to rework several words to get it that way. Appreciate your comment.
