Little Poems
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very humorous poem, Tom. I like this style a lot. Very clever with the "in" and "out". Interesting how you took a photo of your wife's inbox and not your own. LOL.
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Very humorous poem, Tom. I like this style a lot. Very clever with the "in" and "out". Interesting how you took a photo of your wife's inbox and not your own. LOL.
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you. That's because, I don't have one!
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Too funny!
Comment from rod007
Too much stuff, I know, Tom. Try and get some order out of this stack so there is order, but then who wants order. There is none in life, in life you take your chances and win or lose--who cares.
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Too much stuff, I know, Tom. Try and get some order out of this stack so there is order, but then who wants order. There is none in life, in life you take your chances and win or lose--who cares.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you rod. Lol.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
So very true indeed.
The chosen antonym shows thought and logic.
Then winds its way to an answer which provides clarity and resolution.
Well done.
Check line two- may need to add "of"
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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So very true indeed.
The chosen antonym shows thought and logic.
Then winds its way to an answer which provides clarity and resolution.
Well done.
Check line two- may need to add "of"
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you Shirkey. You are right. I fixed it.
Comment from Pantygynt
A really neat little couplet packet with feminine rhyme, internal an external, nestles here between the antonyms. Very clever indeed. I like this one very much.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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A really neat little couplet packet with feminine rhyme, internal an external, nestles here between the antonyms. Very clever indeed. I like this one very much.
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Yep that's my desk as well... Think if I leave stuff in there long enough it won't worth the time to go through it as It will all be out of date lol.. JUST LIKE ME
TK
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Yep that's my desk as well... Think if I leave stuff in there long enough it won't worth the time to go through it as It will all be out of date lol.. JUST LIKE ME
TK
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Sir T. LOL.
Comment from MissMerri
This is an amazing little poem, and truly a creative response to this challenging prompt. I liked the original rhymes of bigger and figure and I liked the antonyms you chose. Very clever and quite well done.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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This is an amazing little poem, and truly a creative response to this challenging prompt. I liked the original rhymes of bigger and figure and I liked the antonyms you chose. Very clever and quite well done.
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you MissMerri. It was a fun write.
Comment from Joan E.
So, you're on a roll with the Antonyms--I'm glad your wife aided your addiction with her "in basket"! I really liked the play on the emphatic "OUT"--I need to heed that message!! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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So, you're on a roll with the Antonyms--I'm glad your wife aided your addiction with her "in basket"! I really liked the play on the emphatic "OUT"--I need to heed that message!! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Joan. Don't we all?
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I reckon! Happy weekend- Joan
Comment from petalangela
Fascinating use of words. It's the first time I have read work of this kind. I may not be qualified to review the technical aspect of the piece. All I can say is that it fascinated me truly
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Fascinating use of words. It's the first time I have read work of this kind. I may not be qualified to review the technical aspect of the piece. All I can say is that it fascinated me truly
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you petalangela.
Comment from TPAC
Very creative I like it you go. Poet displays keen insight and present this case excellently. Short but direct to point. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Very creative I like it you go. Poet displays keen insight and present this case excellently. Short but direct to point. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you TPAC.
