Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 224 "Sky Refreshed"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from MagKing
Truly it is refreshing to catch a piece of heaven on your tongue. And you made it concise and self explanatory to mention the dew drop.
Thanks for sharing this!
MagKing
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Truly it is refreshing to catch a piece of heaven on your tongue. And you made it concise and self explanatory to mention the dew drop.
Thanks for sharing this!
MagKing
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thank you MagKing.
Comment from Joan E.
Because of the contest, this is the third Antonym poem I've read. I enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt and your "piece of heaven" metaphor. I was sure the photograph was one of yours--I should have known better, because your focus is always sharp! Best wishes in the voting booth- Joan
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Because of the contest, this is the third Antonym poem I've read. I enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt and your "piece of heaven" metaphor. I was sure the photograph was one of yours--I should have known better, because your focus is always sharp! Best wishes in the voting booth- Joan
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thank you Joan. I'll probably eventually replace it with one of mine, just need the right moment.
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Now, that does not surprise me! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting style.
I had not heard of this style before.
Antonyms suggest great scope for subject choice.
I'm sure I did this as a child but not so much these days. Lol.
Great complementary image,
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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An interesting style.
I had not heard of this style before.
Antonyms suggest great scope for subject choice.
I'm sure I did this as a child but not so much these days. Lol.
Great complementary image,
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you Shirley. They are pretty simple and fun to do.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Love the picture I can see a Father and son really doing this and the write is simple yet gets to the point of the picture. Well done.
Thank You for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Love the picture I can see a Father and son really doing this and the write is simple yet gets to the point of the picture. Well done.
Thank You for sharing.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie.
Comment from robina1978
Great photo of Dad and his kid in the rain. I think you used this form before. It is very nice. Rain comes from Heaven and you can try to catch it with your tongue. You kept to all the requirements.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Great photo of Dad and his kid in the rain. I think you used this form before. It is very nice. Rain comes from Heaven and you can try to catch it with your tongue. You kept to all the requirements.
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thank you Ine. Ill likely write a couple more.
Comment from marycec
Great fun with this antonym poem. Liked the catch/drop of the opening and closing lines. I also liked the rhyming of tongue and young. Very clever. The title too works well as everything is refreshed by rain.
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Great fun with this antonym poem. Liked the catch/drop of the opening and closing lines. I also liked the rhyming of tongue and young. Very clever. The title too works well as everything is refreshed by rain.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thank you marycec. It was a fun write.
Comment from rod007
I liked this because it is the unification of man with nature through tasting that precious rain drop form the vast skies and clouds of our life. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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I liked this because it is the unification of man with nature through tasting that precious rain drop form the vast skies and clouds of our life. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thank you rod.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is one - the only one so far of these antonym poems that I have seen that cannot reasonable be read as well from the bottom up as from the top dow. I reviewed on the other day that I felt was much better back to front!
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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This is one - the only one so far of these antonym poems that I have seen that cannot reasonable be read as well from the bottom up as from the top dow. I reviewed on the other day that I felt was much better back to front!
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Hmmm, that wasn't a requirement as far as I can tell, but an interesting perspective.
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No it's not a requirement it's just interesting to see how many of them have panned out.
Comment from patcelaw
Nice poem. I love to do that very thing when we have a nice warm rain. I also like to catch snowflakes on my tongue, even to this very day. Patricia
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Nice poem. I love to do that very thing when we have a nice warm rain. I also like to catch snowflakes on my tongue, even to this very day. Patricia
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thank you Patricia. Isn't that fun!
