Comment from Mr. Suffering

Excellent

The shoe dropping sound while kissing worked very well. The "first date", conversation came off genuine. With the trial as a side issue to the date, the story kept my interest all the way through.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015

Thanks much. very encouraging. Thanks again, Mr. S. -Doug

Comment from BJ_Barnes

Excellent

I love your writing. It is very easy to follow and definitely holds my interest. The characters are also so relatable. It will be interesting to see how everything plays out.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Hi BJ----Thank you so much for your compliments. It's encouraging. hope you'll keep reading. Have about ten chapters to go.------------------------Doug

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Action flows smoothly in this tale. Story line easy to follow. Descriptive language well used and holds reader's interest. Write on.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Brett-----Thank you. Hope to down to last chapter in 6 to 8 weeks. Thanks for encouragement. Doug

Comment from fafa

Excellent

I like this story, it has force and a goodwriting, you must continue in thiscommunication footpath, the meeting hasvery good descriptions, blessings

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

fafa-----Thank you for encouragement. hope you'll keep reading. Doug

Comment from Janet7053

Excellent

This was a packed conversation these two engaged in over dinner. I felt like I knew them both. Super dialogue to carry the scene from one fact to the next.

Their kiss with her on tiptoes was very nice.

Intriguing how it will all pan out.

Nice work!

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Hi Janet---Thanks so much for nice review. This is 35th chapter of long novel. i have about 10 chapters to go. Please keep reading. Thanks again-----Doug