Little Poems
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Comment from rod007
A humorous poem that captures the satire of it all. I especially liked the last line of Obama abandoning Afghanistan. Great job, Tom.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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A humorous poem that captures the satire of it all. I especially liked the last line of Obama abandoning Afghanistan. Great job, Tom.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod.
Comment from Joan E.
I have seen this form before and you managed it well. You also cleverly combined the two images and surprised me with your innocent rhymes juxtaposed with the concluding indictment. You should have joined the NaHaWriMo project, since you have clearly written a poem a day during April! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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I have seen this form before and you managed it well. You also cleverly combined the two images and surprised me with your innocent rhymes juxtaposed with the concluding indictment. You should have joined the NaHaWriMo project, since you have clearly written a poem a day during April! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan. Maybe next year if im still kickin around.
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Count on it--I will! :) -Joan
Comment from flylikeaneagle
You are very creative! You choose personalities that show humor and their nations. Good thoughts and rhymes. Thank you for the notes. I'm glad that poets have a month to shine! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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You are very creative! You choose personalities that show humor and their nations. Good thoughts and rhymes. Thank you for the notes. I'm glad that poets have a month to shine! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thank you flylikeaneagle.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha-ha... yeah, that's very true, Tom.
I've never read a poem in a Clerihew format before now. I appreciated the history you included in your author's notes concerning this poetic formats creation, and how it came to be. Great photos accompany this to enhance the humor.
Well done, and thanks for the laugh! ~Dean :D
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Ha-ha... yeah, that's very true, Tom.
I've never read a poem in a Clerihew format before now. I appreciated the history you included in your author's notes concerning this poetic formats creation, and how it came to be. Great photos accompany this to enhance the humor.
Well done, and thanks for the laugh! ~Dean :D
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thank you Dean. Sometimes I wonder about these formats, but there are books published of these Clerihews. So i think i helps to know their origin and purpose.
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You're very welcome, Tom. I enjoyed both the poem and the format. ~Dean
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem makes a great and true perspective of both men.
Good job with the rhyme and format. I have heard of this before but never had it explained.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Your poem makes a great and true perspective of both men.
Good job with the rhyme and format. I have heard of this before but never had it explained.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you jannypan.
