Little Poems
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very good first attempt to write a calligram. It is very creatively done. The words are all about the antique automobile that you have created. The rhyming in your little poem works well too.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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A very good first attempt to write a calligram. It is very creatively done. The words are all about the antique automobile that you have created. The rhyming in your little poem works well too.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sandra. Have a lovely week. Happy holidays.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a very cool poem.
I've never seen a Calligram before. I like it.
And thanks for the information on the form of the poem.
Altogether, well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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This is a very cool poem.
I've never seen a Calligram before. I like it.
And thanks for the information on the form of the poem.
Altogether, well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sharon. I have a few others that I've do e that I'll periodically repost
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow! I am impressed. I don't know how you turn the words sideways and in a circle. Do you do that in Word? I know you can do a lot in there, I just haven't learned it.
I love the words too:)
teresa
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Wow! I am impressed. I don't know how you turn the words sideways and in a circle. Do you do that in Word? I know you can do a lot in there, I just haven't learned it.
I love the words too:)
teresa
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Thank you Teresa. Yes, I do it in Word.
Comment from patcelaw
Tom, I like this and it amazes me when you come up with the Calligram. May you and your wife have a bright and blessed Christmas and a happy and healthy New Year. Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Tom, I like this and it amazes me when you come up with the Calligram. May you and your wife have a bright and blessed Christmas and a happy and healthy New Year. Patricia
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Thank you Patricia. These are hard but fun to do. May your Christmas be happy and blessed, too.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed the poem's design and the words. They are great together.
I have seen something like this called Shape Poems. The words make the shape of whatever the topic is such as if you were writing a poem about an apple. The words would make the shape of the apple.
Good job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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I enjoyed the poem's design and the words. They are great together.
I have seen something like this called Shape Poems. The words make the shape of whatever the topic is such as if you were writing a poem about an apple. The words would make the shape of the apple.
Good job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much jannypan. Yes, it's a subset of concrete or shape poems.
Comment from rod007
This is very unique and interesting. It is a form that I wouldn't be able to do. You did it well with apt words to suit. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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This is very unique and interesting. It is a form that I wouldn't be able to do. You did it well with apt words to suit. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod. It was fun
Comment from bayforesthimankush
A new format of writing poems. It is very interesting. Thanks for providing the reference. The theme of the poem is nice and is illustrated in an excellent way.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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A new format of writing poems. It is very interesting. Thanks for providing the reference. The theme of the poem is nice and is illustrated in an excellent way.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you bayforesthimanksh.
Comment from lancellot
This is very good. You should have thought about creating a contest for a Calligram, this would have won for sure. I got to give you credit for creativity and the time you put into this. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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This is very good. You should have thought about creating a contest for a Calligram, this would have won for sure. I got to give you credit for creativity and the time you put into this. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you lancellot for the review and the stars.
Comment from robina1978
I liked the general layout that complements your poem perfectly. I don't completely understand what a Calligram is. But I can Google it. Might try one as well but it does not seem easy.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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I liked the general layout that complements your poem perfectly. I don't completely understand what a Calligram is. But I can Google it. Might try one as well but it does not seem easy.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Thank you Ine. They are kind of fun.
Comment from Joan E.
I'm so glad sunnilicious introduced you to this form and you nailed it! I can't imagine how long it took you to create, but you are a person of great patience and always up for a challenge. You are no "ham" but someone I'd seek in a jam! Many cheers and have fun with your next calligram too, since I know you can't write just one!! -Joan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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I'm so glad sunnilicious introduced you to this form and you nailed it! I can't imagine how long it took you to create, but you are a person of great patience and always up for a challenge. You are no "ham" but someone I'd seek in a jam! Many cheers and have fun with your next calligram too, since I know you can't write just one!! -Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan. You are right about that. I can't get it out of my head.
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The only way to free yourself is to create another--good luck with the computer apps. -J
