Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A perfect Diatelle and uniquely different subject choice.
I like that you have managed to include so much description and imagery.
What could have been seen as a boring image has been brought to life.
The formatting is spot on and an effective presentation.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2015

Thank you Shirley. It takes work to get it so. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a striking shape you captured with this diatelle! It resonated the patterns in the shadows of the trees in your photograph. I'm amazed you were able to manage the rhyme scheme as well. More cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Thank you, Joan. Your the best!

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A fascinating piece this and a very interesting explanation in the notes. One day I'll have a go at one myself. The poem was beautifully presented as well. A most enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Thank you Pantygynt. . That is good.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice Diatelle. It is spot on for the syllable count and the rhyming. It is not the easiest of poetry forms to do but you did very well. Patricia

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Thank you Patricia. Yes, a Diatelle is a lot of work, but I like the result.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Perfect diatelle form - smooth flowing words with great enjambment keeps it reading well. Thanks for sharing.

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Thank you Teresa. I worked hard to get that shape right.