Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 221 "Hue and Cry"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from rod007
This is an excellent recantation and both poems had a good sense of humor. If the wife isn't happy at your bathroom joke, recant you must less next time you'll have to sleep on the floor of the outhouse. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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This is an excellent recantation and both poems had a good sense of humor. If the wife isn't happy at your bathroom joke, recant you must less next time you'll have to sleep on the floor of the outhouse. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod. I certainly wouldn't to do that. LOL.
Comment from robina1978
I recognise the photo and it complements your poem perfectly. I had never heard of this form but it sounds fun. Your poor wife suffered from the first poem-LOL. I enjoyed both of them.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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I recognise the photo and it complements your poem perfectly. I had never heard of this form but it sounds fun. Your poor wife suffered from the first poem-LOL. I enjoyed both of them.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Ine. Fortunately, she got over it.
Comment from humpwhistle
Now that's interesting. A form of poetry that's only relevant when you've screwed up another poem. Only poets would think up such a thing. So palinode is some kind of angst relief?
Sorry. I'm not really making fun. I'm just trying to absorb the concept.
I hope your wife forgives you.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Now that's interesting. A form of poetry that's only relevant when you've screwed up another poem. Only poets would think up such a thing. So palinode is some kind of angst relief?
Sorry. I'm not really making fun. I'm just trying to absorb the concept.
I hope your wife forgives you.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thanks humpwhistle. Yup, I'm off the couch, and back in my bed.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I am not a great fan of bathroom humor myself Mr T. But this brought back many a memory of a cold run on a winters morn. We were a bit more modern though we had duplex
Two seats instead of one ...
TK
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I am not a great fan of bathroom humor myself Mr T. But this brought back many a memory of a cold run on a winters morn. We were a bit more modern though we had duplex
Two seats instead of one ...
TK
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Ha, nothing like a double header. Thanks Sir T.
Comment from Pantygynt
The inversion of the customary 'hue and cry' added to the fun in this little piece. By the way why does Hue begin with an upper case H? Am I missing something? Anyway I trust your apology was accepted!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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The inversion of the customary 'hue and cry' added to the fun in this little piece. By the way why does Hue begin with an upper case H? Am I missing something? Anyway I trust your apology was accepted!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thanks Pantygynt, didn't intend to, so I'll go fix that.
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Serve me right for trying to read too much into so little!
Comment from patcelaw
I rather think it is not a good idea to upset your spouse.
I am not a big fan of outhouse either as I had to make to many called to one as a child. I am glad she called you I it.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I rather think it is not a good idea to upset your spouse.
I am not a big fan of outhouse either as I had to make to many called to one as a child. I am glad she called you I it.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I agree.
Comment from kiwijenny
Who knew an ode of poo would create a hue? Blue...though perhaps sulphur yellow...me thinks pinks for stinks....oh if your name was Hugh
Wouldn't that do? Ode to odiferous Hugh who's now in deep doo doo with wife Sue. Sewer Sue sues...a worse fight with Hugh ensues....make me stop...this gives me paper work blues..
God bless you Hugh and Sue
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Who knew an ode of poo would create a hue? Blue...though perhaps sulphur yellow...me thinks pinks for stinks....oh if your name was Hugh
Wouldn't that do? Ode to odiferous Hugh who's now in deep doo doo with wife Sue. Sewer Sue sues...a worse fight with Hugh ensues....make me stop...this gives me paper work blues..
God bless you Hugh and Sue
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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That was the most hilarious review i ever got. My wife and I couldn't stop laughing. Thanks for this great review.
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Ha ha ha thank you
Comment from TAB_that's me
I'm not a big fan of swearing or bathroom humor either but try not to let it bother me. This is a fun little poem as was the outhouse.
teresa
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I'm not a big fan of swearing or bathroom humor either but try not to let it bother me. This is a fun little poem as was the outhouse.
teresa
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Teresa .
