Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 222 "The Winner"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from rod007
It must take a lot of figuring out to get to these kind of words or sentences. The words you chose does read the same backwards. Brilliant conception. I don't think I'd have the patience to find these words and play them the way you do. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
It must take a lot of figuring out to get to these kind of words or sentences. The words you chose does read the same backwards. Brilliant conception. I don't think I'd have the patience to find these words and play them the way you do. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod. Once you start, it becomes an obsession as you stark evaluating everything you write backwards and forward.
Comment from Joan E.
The only word I already knew as a palindrome in this poem was "Toyota". Your "racecar" and "now I won" are brilliant. YOU ARE A WINNER! Many cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
The only word I already knew as a palindrome in this poem was "Toyota". Your "racecar" and "now I won" are brilliant. YOU ARE A WINNER! Many cheers- Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan. It is an interesting obsession.
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Obsess away, my friend--as long as you share! -J
Comment from emrpoems
This is awesome.
To have the words read backward must take some talent and you did it very well. Any hint as to how you select the words?
Well paired picture and poem
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
This is awesome.
To have the words read backward must take some talent and you did it very well. Any hint as to how you select the words?
Well paired picture and poem
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thanks Erica, you just scour the dictionary, then figure out good links. It doesn't hurt to be obsessed a bit.
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Thanks for the tip. Will try that form one day
Comment from robina1978
Good picture that complements your poem perfectly. I have heard about the form but forgot it again. The Palindrome worked perfect for what you are saying about your win.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
Good picture that complements your poem perfectly. I have heard about the form but forgot it again. The Palindrome worked perfect for what you are saying about your win.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thank you Ine. Just a poem, didn't actually win. But at least i broke even on the week, so that's a win, i guess.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom - you had me going for a minute - and thought you had won....now I feel deflated. LOL Great poem my friend, works well both ways.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
Dear Tom - you had me going for a minute - and thought you had won....now I feel deflated. LOL Great poem my friend, works well both ways.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thank you Maureen. Though i better add that note.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very neat palindrome over four lines. That is clever and it sort of makes some sense in a way even if it is unlikely. A very nice morning surprise to wake up to. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
This is a very neat palindrome over four lines. That is clever and it sort of makes some sense in a way even if it is unlikely. A very nice morning surprise to wake up to. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt
Comment from stephybs
Never really understood this type of poetry. But I do now , Thanks. It is a very clever little piece and the words with Win in it. Can't go wrong. Very educational for me. Excellent. Stephybs
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
Never really understood this type of poetry. But I do now , Thanks. It is a very clever little piece and the words with Win in it. Can't go wrong. Very educational for me. Excellent. Stephybs
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thank you stephybs.
Comment from benoenose
Human fervor is a desire to accomplish. This optimistic desire that was inbuilt within imagination has become a reality. This poem is an imagination and not yet a reality.
It only becomes reality if I experience it with my senses, though a reality poem it resembles, it an imaginative poem, 'now I won' has no full stop.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
Human fervor is a desire to accomplish. This optimistic desire that was inbuilt within imagination has become a reality. This poem is an imagination and not yet a reality.
It only becomes reality if I experience it with my senses, though a reality poem it resembles, it an imaginative poem, 'now I won' has no full stop.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thank you benoenose.