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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Michael,
I reflect on your poem the same way I reflect on this event of Easter resurrected from March on June wedding... love the way you introduced that... May flowers breathe in season's breeze... yeah, truly loved that... and
wisdom ages wine perfected
truth changed in time
twisted into lying tongue.
You have a way about you brother, a swag in thought and words that always leave me digging deeper into your wisdom... everything that drips from your mind, has meaning... and that's what I love... PH Fhat brother, substance!
Be well friend, and reflect in the reflection of time, it's there the answers have been sown.
Great music too!
With our thoughts we create,
our place in destiny,
James.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hi Michael,
I reflect on your poem the same way I reflect on this event of Easter resurrected from March on June wedding... love the way you introduced that... May flowers breathe in season's breeze... yeah, truly loved that... and
wisdom ages wine perfected
truth changed in time
twisted into lying tongue.
You have a way about you brother, a swag in thought and words that always leave me digging deeper into your wisdom... everything that drips from your mind, has meaning... and that's what I love... PH Fhat brother, substance!
Be well friend, and reflect in the reflection of time, it's there the answers have been sown.
Great music too!
With our thoughts we create,
our place in destiny,
James.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hey James...-smile- ..ah man I feel like I've sucked on helium when you arrive...Beaver's brother says head swell...woooooooo ...thank you man your good for me....love Bug-
Comment from Pili Pubul
Very interesting my philosopher friend, some very creative thinking ,
Love fourth stanza, very you. Poor Socrates !!!! To good for this world.
I may comeback one of this days... No motivated yet... Hugs.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Very interesting my philosopher friend, some very creative thinking ,
Love fourth stanza, very you. Poor Socrates !!!! To good for this world.
I may comeback one of this days... No motivated yet... Hugs.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Pili...-smile- where are you...why don't you ever call...are you home now...? I've been very worried about you...been gone a while ya know...I lost your number or I would have harassed you....miss you Love Michael
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No I didn't know you was away or are away, hope in good spirits and as always creating... Since my last health crisis I am not motivated, yet , not depress... My solitary thoughts entertain my days... Love... Pili
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solitary thoughts...wow...could that sound more alone...how come you wont call me...I'm begging now...please...?
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - I'm just coming back online and catching up on posts. This has a layered effect which brings forth much contemplation. Both in life now and history.
It does seem as though the cycle of wisdom eludes us at times, within the yellow pages of our thoughts.
Especially loved:
"who convinces quicksand its foundation
scattered as dandelion seed
alive is the weed dying to survive" // thought provoking realization.
Wonderful to read and soak in, a six from me :)
Thanks for sharing,
Mo
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Dear Michael - I'm just coming back online and catching up on posts. This has a layered effect which brings forth much contemplation. Both in life now and history.
It does seem as though the cycle of wisdom eludes us at times, within the yellow pages of our thoughts.
Especially loved:
"who convinces quicksand its foundation
scattered as dandelion seed
alive is the weed dying to survive" // thought provoking realization.
Wonderful to read and soak in, a six from me :)
Thanks for sharing,
Mo
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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man you have know idea how happy I am to see you...first...and then they...and so on and so on...unbelievable...I'm telling ya Mo...its unbelievable...please stay close you never know...ya know...-smile- Hi...miss you. Thank you Precious you make me happy...-smile- love Michael
Comment from daeneam
Holy Week in the Philippines (Spanish: Semana Santa, Filipino: Mahál na Araw) is a significant religious observance for the Roman Catholic majority and most Protestant groups. I wish we will have a meaningful and blessed week ahead of us! I'll be praying for you my dear friend! God bless us! c", Mae
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Holy Week in the Philippines (Spanish: Semana Santa, Filipino: Mahál na Araw) is a significant religious observance for the Roman Catholic majority and most Protestant groups. I wish we will have a meaningful and blessed week ahead of us! I'll be praying for you my dear friend! God bless us! c", Mae
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hi Mae....-smile- how are you Sweetheart...Amen...hope so too...save me some blessing....and pass the meaningful please. haha,,,have fun. God bless you too stay safe.....love Michael
Comment from Jaq Cee
As always you weave your words into a beautiful poem. I don't always catch the meaning but I enjoy the challenge.
Hope all is well with you and yours, take care Jaq xx :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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As always you weave your words into a beautiful poem. I don't always catch the meaning but I enjoy the challenge.
Hope all is well with you and yours, take care Jaq xx :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hi Jaq...-smile- well look at you....I could have swore you ran away...what happen New York to big for ya....lol....ahhh just playing...good to see you sexy....love Michael
Comment from Sis Cat
Your poem possesses a voice and a rhythm I have not encountered before. I read it aloud twice, and then thrice and still cannot make sense of it. The free verse lines have a choppy sound when read. Read poems aloud. Your poem sounds like the mind thinking and not like the voice speaking.
I know you are trying really hard to express deep thoughts, but for me, at least, the poem lacked clarity and did not congeal around a core theme I can identify. The poem is modern almost to the point of being abstract. Your poem is the world seen through a kaleidoscope through which I cannot decipher what I am looking at but I am dazzled by colors.
Thank you for sharing this though provoking work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Your poem possesses a voice and a rhythm I have not encountered before. I read it aloud twice, and then thrice and still cannot make sense of it. The free verse lines have a choppy sound when read. Read poems aloud. Your poem sounds like the mind thinking and not like the voice speaking.
I know you are trying really hard to express deep thoughts, but for me, at least, the poem lacked clarity and did not congeal around a core theme I can identify. The poem is modern almost to the point of being abstract. Your poem is the world seen through a kaleidoscope through which I cannot decipher what I am looking at but I am dazzled by colors.
Thank you for sharing this though provoking work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hello....-smile- my life....hasn't gone as planned...does any...? Hell...I don't really believe I'll die...do you...? Precession is for machine parts...people are perfect example of experience...puzzled. -smile-....pieced together wisdom hung by a gossamer thread...wind chiming for some conformation. Thank you for enjoying....love Bug-
Comment from l.raven
Hi sweet you, love this...May flowers breathe in season's breeze...Easter resurrected from March on...June wedding forever...as only you can write...I so love your poem...and the picture beautiful...and love this song...so very nicely written...I love ya...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Hi sweet you, love this...May flowers breathe in season's breeze...Easter resurrected from March on...June wedding forever...as only you can write...I so love your poem...and the picture beautiful...and love this song...so very nicely written...I love ya...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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ah love that song...just came out listening to it. ya know its getting close to July again...getting to where I don't look forward to the month anymore...-smile- Thank you Linda, love you too...michael
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I Know it is...and you will...got something special in mind...smile...goodnight...xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
I'm glad you had time for one more poem before you went back to work. You found a grand compliment to your poem with the dandelion picture. I enjoyed your bits of rhyme and philosophy in "wisdom ages wine" as "destiny leads first and last dance". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I'm glad you had time for one more poem before you went back to work. You found a grand compliment to your poem with the dandelion picture. I enjoyed your bits of rhyme and philosophy in "wisdom ages wine" as "destiny leads first and last dance". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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its five thirty J...do you think we can put the whip away until tomorrow Boss Lady....I know your eager for another trip ...but i'm sore...so...please...lets let the sun set on this disturbing day and i promise jimmy will get to cracking corn first rooster call early morn....K...? may I get a glass of water please.....please...? lol love Bug-
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I'm sorry it was a rough ride at work today. Maybe the whip wielder will realize it's the holiday season and go easier the rest of the week. One can only hope... Take good care of yourself and yes, drink lots of water. More hugs- Joan
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yea right...lot's a water...good lookin' out J...-wink-
Comment from MoonMuse
Beautiful. I loved the quicksand & dandelion seed analogy. And "control is balance only perceived" is such a great line. Nice job & a wonderful read. Thanks for posting. Cheers!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Beautiful. I loved the quicksand & dandelion seed analogy. And "control is balance only perceived" is such a great line. Nice job & a wonderful read. Thanks for posting. Cheers!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Hey Buddy...-smile- good to see you, hope you've been well. thank you sir for enjoying....love Bug-
Comment from Healing
Interesting read ... as are all your written works.
A style I have not seen before, 1 unto its own.
I like how it reads and enjoy the structure very much.
Great stuff
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Interesting read ... as are all your written works.
A style I have not seen before, 1 unto its own.
I like how it reads and enjoy the structure very much.
Great stuff
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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yea thats what "they" tell me....-headshake-...ya know, when I was growing up it was the red hair....yep...now....this. its ah prejidicial racist mindset....we've come to realize this on the forum...hm hmm...were all mess...its ah unmistakable....anyway,,,thanks for stopping by...bring some fruit next time....love bug-
