Comment from Janet7053

Excellent

whimsical imagination. find their tiny teats... is my favorite line.

this has the mark of a Dr. Suess work.

Best Wishes in your writing endeavors.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015

Thanks so much!

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A milk churn would work. You definitely took the contest instructions to heart - you thought of a way to use a butterfly that no one ever thought of before. Your poem is very creative. Good free style verse, with amazing imagery.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Comment from Pen of Fire

Excellent

How cute is this! I wonder what butterfly butter would sell for. Rhyming was great and can imagine it would be hard to find art to depict your chosen topic. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I like your approach to writing
about the butterfly - about its
milk - rather unique


Good luck with the contest, my friend

Margaret

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Thanks so much!

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi TAB

Great fun here ... my mind turned to a similar idea when I read the contest requirements. Great minds!! lol Creative and unique, something out of the box and good fun. Great rhythm. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Hugs - Lovi xoxo

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Thanks so much!

reply by Lovinia on 27-Mar-2015

Smiles - Lovi xoxo

Comment from Helena Frances

Excellent

This is fun read, and the visuals described make quite a picture!
Playing with images is such a great past time.
Thank you for the smiles:)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

LOL! Your words paint a great visual for this one. Too cute. A lot of fun. That's a good one----butterfly butter. That's thinking outside the box.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This could well be humor poetry. I had to laugh a bit as I was picturing you with tweezers milking a butter fly. Then watching you churn the milk is also funny. Patricia
Are you having butterfly butter on toast in the morning?

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015

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Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hahaha - this cracked me up Teresa. I would be surprised if there was a picture to go with that. The milking reminded me of the scene in the movie Meet the Fockers, where Ben Stiller said, "You can milk anything with nipples." And Robert Deniro replies, "I have nipples Greg, can you milk me?" Can you tell I have watched that many times? This is a unique entry for the contest. Many entries, I think it is going to be tough. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015

Thanks so much! I love that movie too!

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! YUM! G'day Teresa, that is a very witty piece and I'm not surprised you couldn't find a picture to suit it. I think it's a great contest entry and I wish you luck mate. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015

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Thanks so much!