Little Poems
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Comment from evilynne
Your poem is well written, imaginative, and certainly gives us hope for approaching spring season. The accompanying picture is well chosen. Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Your poem is well written, imaginative, and certainly gives us hope for approaching spring season. The accompanying picture is well chosen. Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you evilynne.
Comment from pennedup
wonderful sonnet about the arrival of Spring. Nice to know she is coming, here actually, but as I sit here at the computer , all I can see is SNOW. .. and 5 to 10 coming in over night. Sigh!! Thanks for reminding me what it looks like.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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wonderful sonnet about the arrival of Spring. Nice to know she is coming, here actually, but as I sit here at the computer , all I can see is SNOW. .. and 5 to 10 coming in over night. Sigh!! Thanks for reminding me what it looks like.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you penned up. Brrrr. Just think, it is officially spring now.
Comment from l.raven
time for the melting of Winter...and the beauty of Spring....as all nature comes alive...very well written...and it's the perfect picture
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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time for the melting of Winter...and the beauty of Spring....as all nature comes alive...very well written...and it's the perfect picture
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thank you I raven.
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you are so very welcome...good luck in the contest...Luff xxoo
Comment from RYME4U
I like the sonnet rhythm of this spring poem. It is very descriptive and well written.You have presented it in a very attractive manner. Good job!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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I like the sonnet rhythm of this spring poem. It is very descriptive and well written.You have presented it in a very attractive manner. Good job!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you Ryme4u.
Comment from mfowler
I like the sonnet form to herald in spring.
You've done it well with some very nice imagery creating a warming, imaginative scene.
Liked: The eagle nests on trees upon the shore
Will soon bequeath brief glimpses of their young.
Your formatting is good.
The rhyming and meter appear to be correct by sonnet standards.
The only tiny thing for me is that isn't quite right is the lack of a real 'turn' (volta) in the third verse which is traditional in this format.
Nevertheless, it's a beautiful verse that adds to the sum and doesn't detract from your poem's intention on iota.
I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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I like the sonnet form to herald in spring.
You've done it well with some very nice imagery creating a warming, imaginative scene.
Liked: The eagle nests on trees upon the shore
Will soon bequeath brief glimpses of their young.
Your formatting is good.
The rhyming and meter appear to be correct by sonnet standards.
The only tiny thing for me is that isn't quite right is the lack of a real 'turn' (volta) in the third verse which is traditional in this format.
Nevertheless, it's a beautiful verse that adds to the sum and doesn't detract from your poem's intention on iota.
I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much for this thorough review. I will take them to heart.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate. This beautiful little poem of yours is like a breath of fresh air after all the cold winter doom and gloom ones over the past few months. I loved it and it gives me a glimpse of sping because we don't get it in the tropics, just a wet and dry season. Good luck in the contest, Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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G'day mate. This beautiful little poem of yours is like a breath of fresh air after all the cold winter doom and gloom ones over the past few months. I loved it and it gives me a glimpse of sping because we don't get it in the tropics, just a wet and dry season. Good luck in the contest, Cheers Fez
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you Fez.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Nice imagery and nod to Spring.
Thx, I can see more so why you chose this photo now that you explained in your notes.
Well Penned and presented. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Hi,
Nice imagery and nod to Spring.
Thx, I can see more so why you chose this photo now that you explained in your notes.
Well Penned and presented. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you Jax
Comment from juliesibs
A great poem for spring. I love all the seasonal poem's at this time of year. Yours holds it own as well done.
Great job, Julie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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A great poem for spring. I love all the seasonal poem's at this time of year. Yours holds it own as well done.
Great job, Julie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you Julia.
