Comment from
Patricia Dsouza
Your writing is fabulous and graceful. I esteem the way you progress and flow throughout. You have an remarkably brilliant skills.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
Thank you very much for your wonderful praise of my work Patricia Dsouza. Is there anything I need to improve upon in my writing that you can see? I am always striving to become an even better writer so I thank you again for your lovely review!
Comment from
Jackreese
You have an erray of different characters the story itself I found engaging. Skye and Noah's dialogue was written well and the ending of the chapter left the reader wanting more.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
Thank you very much Jackreese :) I hope the next chapter lives up to expectations and any pointers/hints would be greatly appreciated.
- Silence