Comment from
CR Delport
I am not familiar with the story, but it is interesting and I like the way it is written. Good dialogue and not much excess. Good job.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
Thank you very much :) I hope you have a good day too
Comment from
Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write with an interesting story. The title caught my eye and I enjoed the read from start to finish. The contents do not need any changes. Thanks for sharing. Mary
Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
Thank you very much for your kind review! This is my first update for the year so I was anxiously waiting for feedback, seeing as I hadn't posted for two months prior. :)