Justine
Contest entry.8 total reviews
Comment from mshirachot
Usually all it takes is an e-mail to Tom to get the money back into your account. This story speaks volumes. Thanks for sharing it.
One thing I noted was in this line: "In tears she ran wildly through the cycle of reserve post". You might try RESERVED POSTS so that sentence makes more sense.
Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Usually all it takes is an e-mail to Tom to get the money back into your account. This story speaks volumes. Thanks for sharing it.
One thing I noted was in this line: "In tears she ran wildly through the cycle of reserve post". You might try RESERVED POSTS so that sentence makes more sense.
Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you for such kind and inspiring encouragement. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't 'get' the last line, so maybe re-think it or clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't 'get' the last line, so maybe re-think it or clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't completely 'get' the last line, though I think I know where you're coming from, so maybe clarify it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from Domino 2
You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't 'get' the last line, so maybe re-think it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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You need a comma after 'words' in 1st line.
With respect, I don't 'get' the last line, so maybe re-think it. On the other hand, maybe I'm just being dim.
Fun fanstory contest theme for a fanstory contest. :-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thank you. Since I have multiple posts from the same peeps on this I am obliged to copy ..... just love hpw the upgrade works so far ROFL.
Comment from giraffmang
I have to admit, I read this and didn't get it first time round. Then I read it again and laughed. Sometimes I am a bit dense you see!
I really liked this well written and crafted tale. I have felt like this when I have come up against a certain writer and think what a waste of an entry fee!
Good luck to you in the competition.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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I have to admit, I read this and didn't get it first time round. Then I read it again and laughed. Sometimes I am a bit dense you see!
I really liked this well written and crafted tale. I have felt like this when I have come up against a certain writer and think what a waste of an entry fee!
Good luck to you in the competition.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the encouragement. It is one of those things that goes round and round BUT when you laugh the circle stops spinning.
