Comment from Michaelk

Excellent

That's so wrong and yet so funny too. Very well written. You had me all the way. I did not see your magnificent twist coming. It makes me wonder if there really are people out there who do that. For some reason I think so.
Great story with a fantastic twist.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks. It was a fun write.

Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

To the author of this amusing short story, "Valentine's Day Marketing". Lawyers are the scum of the earth. Ha! Good luck in the contest. Carole

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Especially divorce lawyers. Thanks.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I actually closed this document because the penny hadn't dropped and then I laughed out loud. Yeah, of course the divorce lawyer is preparing cards to send to potential client's partners, just to provoke a bit of jealousy, and by default, lawyer business. Why is that lawyers are the butt of so many jokes? Where there's smoke there's fire, I guess. A well spent sixty words. Good luck in the vote.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks. A guffaw is the goal of every writer. Either that or tears, but I digress...

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

A story told in 60 words takes some doing. You seem to have achieved this with a witty unexpected ending.

I would say that you have a good chance of winning this competition.

:) Mel.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

You are very kind. Thanks.

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

ok

this was such a chuckle
thank you for that
well done

thank you for sharing
good luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

It does make one think of endless possibilities though, doesn't it?

reply by ann marie mazz on 08-Jan-2015

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

What evil people will do for money. In 60 words you presented the attributes of a character, the plot and the future dramatic outcome that is destine to occur. Great flash fiction story.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks. I appreciate the read.

Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

I think you might be right about that being an old joke! But hey, now you've got your copyright on it! Thanks for the laugh. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings to you!
Marsha

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015

So glad I could give you a chuckle.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

HA! This is a very humorous approach to the writing prompt. Well written, fun and interesting. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015

Thanks, just imagine the trouble one card can create.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

You don't need the comma after 'each', though I would suggest one after 'perfume'.

Amusing short story, though I find the ending a little unclear. How would HE in particular get the 'business'?

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015

Thanks, I'll look at it again.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

I enjoyed this one.

It was very amusing.
Should there be a comma after each? And I think envelope should be plural. hope this helps :)

GMG

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015

Thanks for the help.