Choices
Life is about choices...26 total reviews
Comment from Spatchcocked Chicken
Very economical word choices here, just as the competition calls for. you mange to infuse some quiet emotion into the short write.
Nice one
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Very economical word choices here, just as the competition calls for. you mange to infuse some quiet emotion into the short write.
Nice one
Comment Written 16-Jul-2016
Comment from Michaelk
Well, at least you're done making choices. From here on out they'll all be made for you. Very well done to tell a story of a lifetime of regret in only sixty words. Sounds like your character needed to sit down and rethink his choices each time. It's interesting how sometimes bad choices can fall one right after another, creating an avalanche of consequences.
Good story.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Well, at least you're done making choices. From here on out they'll all be made for you. Very well done to tell a story of a lifetime of regret in only sixty words. Sounds like your character needed to sit down and rethink his choices each time. It's interesting how sometimes bad choices can fall one right after another, creating an avalanche of consequences.
Good story.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015
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Thanks Michall. Your review is very much appreciated.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a tragic story and compelling piece of literary art dear anon! the mood is set from the very start and follows throughout the whole poem. quite a melancholic work!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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this is a tragic story and compelling piece of literary art dear anon! the mood is set from the very start and follows throughout the whole poem. quite a melancholic work!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thank you very much for the review and your thoughts. Much appreciated
Comment from Judy Couch
Yes, it would be a bad choice. There seem to be a lot of people who consistently make bad choices. Most of them don't pull the trigger though.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Yes, it would be a bad choice. There seem to be a lot of people who consistently make bad choices. Most of them don't pull the trigger though.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the review and your thoughts. Much appreciated
Comment from seaglass
Yes, that would be the worse choice of all. Life isn't over till it's over. This short essay details the lost path that leads to despair.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Yes, that would be the worse choice of all. Life isn't over till it's over. This short essay details the lost path that leads to despair.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thanks for your thoughts. They are very much appreciated
Comment from forestport12
This is an important subject one I'm glad you touched on. I've wondered why so many psychics run into suicide ghost? Being stuck in the same place, unable to leave. Could be the mother of all ironies. Since suicide is a form of escape. I like what you did with this to raise awareness.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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This is an important subject one I'm glad you touched on. I've wondered why so many psychics run into suicide ghost? Being stuck in the same place, unable to leave. Could be the mother of all ironies. Since suicide is a form of escape. I like what you did with this to raise awareness.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the review and your thoughts. Much appreciated
Comment from Charlene0513
That's right life is all about choices and knowing when to take a risk.
Subsequently, the urges of knowledge and understanding of what you are doing may help the cause in making that horrific decision.LOL
Charlene
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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That's right life is all about choices and knowing when to take a risk.
Subsequently, the urges of knowledge and understanding of what you are doing may help the cause in making that horrific decision.LOL
Charlene
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning
yes
life is about choices
we face them each day
good or bad
your ending example is so true
thank you for sharing
never did you stray
ann marie
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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good morning
yes
life is about choices
we face them each day
good or bad
your ending example is so true
thank you for sharing
never did you stray
ann marie
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thank you for the review and taking the time to comment.
Comment from tfawcus
Great! There are some who seem destined to be losers all the way. I like the sardonic humour of this. Reminds me of some of the detective stories of yesteryear!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Great! There are some who seem destined to be losers all the way. I like the sardonic humour of this. Reminds me of some of the detective stories of yesteryear!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the review and you comments. very much appreciated
Comment from Walu Feral
Wow that is one hell of a story in 59 words mate. It is a really great contest entry and I think you have a good chance of winning. I'd like to read it in more depth. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Wow that is one hell of a story in 59 words mate. It is a really great contest entry and I think you have a good chance of winning. I'd like to read it in more depth. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the feedback. It is much appreciated
