Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 186 "Exhausted"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from risktaker
I love it. "I am to pooped to pop." I love the photo and the message. I love the imagery OF PLAYING UNTIL THE EYES CLOSE. I love the scene of actively participating in his activities until fatigue stops him. I love the innocence and the joy of you children. They bring a lot of happiness to their families. Children keep us young at heart and open us up to seeing the world through new eyes. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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I love it. "I am to pooped to pop." I love the photo and the message. I love the imagery OF PLAYING UNTIL THE EYES CLOSE. I love the scene of actively participating in his activities until fatigue stops him. I love the innocence and the joy of you children. They bring a lot of happiness to their families. Children keep us young at heart and open us up to seeing the world through new eyes. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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Thank you risktaker for such enthusiastic comments.
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Comment from Joan E.
More thanks to your daughter for another cute photograph. Thank you again for sharing your grandson, and demonstrating a little-known form. The final line from Donald Duck is clever and appropriate. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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More thanks to your daughter for another cute photograph. Thank you again for sharing your grandson, and demonstrating a little-known form. The final line from Donald Duck is clever and appropriate. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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Thank you Joan, actually it's Porky Pig.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom, This reminds me of my own kids at that age - wow long time ago. Lovely sentimental piece with a touch of humor making me smile. Loved her picture - mine seem to load fuzzy when they are my own pics.
Thanks for sharing and happy holidays.
Maureen
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Dear Tom, This reminds me of my own kids at that age - wow long time ago. Lovely sentimental piece with a touch of humor making me smile. Loved her picture - mine seem to load fuzzy when they are my own pics.
Thanks for sharing and happy holidays.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Thank you Maureen. They do grow so fast. It was a fun write.
Comment from Jay Squires
Ohhhhhhh! What I wouldn't give to be able to do that. He has taken "tuckered out" to a whole new level.
Little Isaac is adorable. You must be one proud Grandpa.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Ohhhhhhh! What I wouldn't give to be able to do that. He has taken "tuckered out" to a whole new level.
Little Isaac is adorable. You must be one proud Grandpa.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Thank you Jay. Yes I am.
Comment from giraffmang
I like this poem a lot.
Had not heard of this format before but it is kinda sweet.
Your subject matter fits it perfectly it seems.
A love that this is so true, and amusing.
Perfect choice of picture too.
Nicely done
GMG
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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I like this poem a lot.
Had not heard of this format before but it is kinda sweet.
Your subject matter fits it perfectly it seems.
A love that this is so true, and amusing.
Perfect choice of picture too.
Nicely done
GMG
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much giraffmang.
