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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Only God Knew."From victim to survivor of abuse.
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Comment from Commando
Merry Christmas, Shirley and may I say, "you certainly captured my heart with this one." I have read your poems, and cherish "Only God Knew" most of all. You write from the heart, so please keep it up. May you be blessed with health and happiness always. May the year 2015, "be your best ever."
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Merry Christmas, Shirley and may I say, "you certainly captured my heart with this one." I have read your poems, and cherish "Only God Knew" most of all. You write from the heart, so please keep it up. May you be blessed with health and happiness always. May the year 2015, "be your best ever."
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much.
I really appreciate your generous six star review.
Your appreciation and support are encouraging and thoughtful.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Treischel
An excellent poem about sustaining faith that carried you through in the face of adversity. This poignant poetic portrait of the impoverished little girl is very touching. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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An excellent poem about sustaining faith that carried you through in the face of adversity. This poignant poetic portrait of the impoverished little girl is very touching. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
Your review is appreciated.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a distressing post that the author has created with this piece of work. There is hope in this too and I am so happy that you have found solace in your faith. Sorry, no sixes left.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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This is a distressing post that the author has created with this piece of work. There is hope in this too and I am so happy that you have found solace in your faith. Sorry, no sixes left.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you Tomes.
Your kind review is appreciated.
Merry Christmas.
:-) Shirley
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My pleasure. Merry Christmas.
Comment from adewpearl
great photo
good use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in peace within prayer
a most thoughtful biographical poem with a strong spiritual component :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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great photo
good use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in peace within prayer
a most thoughtful biographical poem with a strong spiritual component :-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you Brooke.
I appreciate your time and generous review.
:-) Shirley
Comment from l.raven
HI Shirley, some times it's hard to keep faith...but we just have to believe...I am so glad you did...a very well written story...very well told...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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HI Shirley, some times it's hard to keep faith...but we just have to believe...I am so glad you did...a very well written story...very well told...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you Linda.
Your uplifting and positive review and support are appreciated.
Merry Christmas.
:-) Shirley
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Hi Shirley, you are so very welcome...Merry Christmas...xxoo
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Shirley,
This is sorrow-filled and beautiful at the same time. In our darkest of hours there can always be hope, as you found in your faith.
Your descriptions really bring out the emotion.
I tell you, I look at this pix and we could have been sisters! (*<*)
Check the beginning of your sentences. Some are lined even but others are indented one or two spaces.
*Happy Holidays*
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*;*)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Hi, Shirley,
This is sorrow-filled and beautiful at the same time. In our darkest of hours there can always be hope, as you found in your faith.
Your descriptions really bring out the emotion.
I tell you, I look at this pix and we could have been sisters! (*<*)
Check the beginning of your sentences. Some are lined even but others are indented one or two spaces.
*Happy Holidays*
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*;*)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thanks Jax.
Your kind and helpful reviews are truly appreciated.
I fixed the glitches-don't know why it happened.
Merry Christmas.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Sankey
God bless you dear Sister. I think God for what He has done for you. The shame was not yours in birth dear lady. I love that Psalm I quoted in my book about how before we were formed in our mother's womb He knew us.
Thanks so much for sharing and I love your picture. I just hope Erin is trusting our Saviour as I know we both are.
God Bless you dear friend. Please pray I am writing a poem related to the awful thing that happened in Sydney yesterday.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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God bless you dear Sister. I think God for what He has done for you. The shame was not yours in birth dear lady. I love that Psalm I quoted in my book about how before we were formed in our mother's womb He knew us.
Thanks so much for sharing and I love your picture. I just hope Erin is trusting our Saviour as I know we both are.
God Bless you dear friend. Please pray I am writing a poem related to the awful thing that happened in Sydney yesterday.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and thoughtful review.
Merry Christmas.
Comment from Nosha17
You found the strength and determination to overcome all your past ills by reaching out to God. Excellent message and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Cute picture, enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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You found the strength and determination to overcome all your past ills by reaching out to God. Excellent message and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Cute picture, enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you Faye.
I appreciate your time and thoughtful review.
Merry Christmas.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Shirley - so true indeed, we can't determine what life is to be as a child - but we can take all of our hopes and dreams to be all we want to be as we grow. This is a wonderful poem very inspirational to read and ponder. Excellent work my friend.
Thanks for sharing it, happy holidays.
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Dear Shirley - so true indeed, we can't determine what life is to be as a child - but we can take all of our hopes and dreams to be all we want to be as we grow. This is a wonderful poem very inspirational to read and ponder. Excellent work my friend.
Thanks for sharing it, happy holidays.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thank you Maureen.
Your positive review and support are much appreciated.
:-) Shirley
