Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your appealing, artful photograph and this form new to me. I liked the idea of the propositions and an overall theme plus your regular syllable pattern and rhymes. Your wit is "worthy of praise"! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thank you Joan. Those are fun to write.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

If I don't learn about poetry
then how can verses be a nicety

Yes, Tom, this one did it for me. I liked these lines:
"If you believe we are all good within,
Then why is the whole world so full of sin"

Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014

Thanks rod. Your If-Then review was cool.

Comment from Erys

Excellent

Some entitled thoughts in your poem. In general is said to don't be afraid too much of contradictions. They kinda confuses, it's true, but there are healthy. These contradictions you evoke are not healthy, but we used to live with them even we could not find any explanation.

Best wishes!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014

Thank you Erys

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I haven't read one of these poems before. It was an effective vehicle for the reflection on the current state of the Universe and human race. Good use of rhyming and great picture. Most enjoyable. Faye

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014

Thank you Faye. Wonderful observations.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Interesting concept--a question raised in each couplet;
Many of life's questions--we always ask "if";
Easier to ask questions than to receive answers;
Nice artwork--the light of God beaming through the stained glass.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014

Thank you Margaret.